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This is my big, black standard poodle, Max. I remember the day I got him. I was coming home from school one Friday, and when I walked in the door with my evil brother and my dad, there was a little black puppy stepping towards us. "Who's this?" my brother asked. "That's Max," said my mom, who was sitting on her couch. "He's your new dog." "really?" I asked. "Yes, he's all yours." mom replied. Then I burst into tears, because I've always wanted a dog. My parents explained that he was a standard poodle, so he would grow very big, and poodles have hair like a human's, so they are perfect for allergy sufferers like my brother. That day was the best day of my entire life. Max is now 9 months old, and he is already huge. people always say " he's only nine months!?!?" whenever we tell someone his age. standard poodles are the largest poodles, minature poodles are small, and toy poodles are extremely tiny.
Anyway, comments? is this intermediate?

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edit: fixed up the collar a little.