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Any good for a griffin sketch? by cooolinamaza

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Any good for a griffin sketch?

Postby cooolinamaza » Sat Nov 05, 2016 10:44 pm

please give me your opinions, i want to get better!
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Re: Any good for a griffin sketch?

Postby forestfolke » Thu Nov 10, 2016 8:18 pm

Well it should have fluff in quite a few more places (Unless it's a bald griffin, that is!) but other than that, it's an okay sketch
Those highlights and shading or whatever that is is a bit distracting and unneeded though
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Re: Any good for a griffin sketch?

Postby Tonnerre » Fri Nov 11, 2016 5:54 am

Avoid using just white to highlight and don't use black to shade
Spend time filling in more of the shade spots too
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Re: Any good for a griffin sketch?

Postby cooolinamaza » Fri Nov 11, 2016 7:57 pm

usamagnol_ wrote:Well it should have fluff in quite a few more places (Unless it's a bald griffin, that is!) but other than that, it's an okay sketch
Those highlights and shading or whatever that is is a bit distracting and unneeded though


thnx and sorry, i like to know where i am going to put it

tekyo wrote:Avoid using just white to highlight and don't use black to shade
Spend time filling in more of the shade spots too


i am planning, i was just planning where shading and highlights would go, but thnx!
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