[AllegedButton60]

Tried editing your lines instead of just drawing over them ;v;
I kept a lot of aspects from your art in this so that it's easier for you to see the changes-
I DID draw my own redline, but didn't add it because it would make everything more cluttered ^_^
Just a few tips to show you,
but a good thing to do is study actual animals and look at their shapes!
I'd be more helpful, but I'm still learning myself uvu)\

[Fizzy Soda Pop]

Ah,
Very nice as well as helpful.
thank you so much!