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Deer (Need Opinion) by the trickster

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Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:14 pm

Working on, give your honest opinion, I stopped because my hands hurt. This is my first drawing using the oekaki.
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:25 pm

There. I've worked on the front legs (They suck, I know.)
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:31 pm

This is what I have so far. My hand hurts sooooo badly, even though I only worked on this for 23 minutes, and it's 11:31 for me. I'm so tired, but proud of this in a way because I tried my best and I'm still not done.
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:34 pm

The lines are killing me! I did all this on laptop and it is soooo bad.
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby Fruitywhales » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:36 pm

Aw come on. It's pretty good! It only lacks body shape. Maybe curve it in the middle so the back isn't just straight? The deer body seems a bit too long as well. It's still lovely! :)
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:37 pm

Thank you! It took me to long to get the back legs right and the front legs... Are terrible.
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Wed Aug 24, 2016 3:44 pm

MY FINGERS ARE KILLING ME.
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby Destiel<3 » Wed Aug 24, 2016 5:42 pm

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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby banned salty pearl. » Wed Aug 24, 2016 5:51 pm

Make the legs a bit longer, Add more of a thigh to the back legs and front and make the hooves more visible instead of just stumps... other than that its perfect. :D
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Re: Deer (Need Opinion)

Postby the trickster » Sun Sep 04, 2016 1:15 pm

what is this...? I suck at drawing.
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