Please take into account that having a mouse is no reason to be unable to draw nice things. You do not need a tablet to draw well, and different things work for different people.
You should look at LiquidOnyx's Deviant art. He uses a mouse and produces some beautiful digital stuff.
www.liquidonyx.deviantart.comJust keep practising and you will improve and all together it isn't a bad drawing either, I like the colours you've used and the contrast of light and dark. :)