[keylimecoyote]

"You did your best, Cinderpaw," she growled. "No cat can do more."
"But it wasn't good enough." Cinderpaw pointed out dully.
I wanted to practice drawing with a mouse, (I still haven't gotten a tablet) so with a lot of smoothing and a mouse I drew Cinderpelt when she was still an apprentice. (spoilers for some, highlight if you don't care): I decided to draw her when Silverstream died, because its one of my favorite scenes. It shows off her character, and I love it. (End of spoilers).

Constructive criticism is appreciated, and if you are gonna talk about the books then don't talk about things past the first series (I am on Midnight) and put spoiler warnings.

Might add a background later.

[Purrs The Cat]

Nice!I remember dat part.

[keylimecoyote]

Nice!I remember dat part.

Thanks!

[cardboardteeth]

i'd say that you should make the ears a little bit smaller and try to fluff up the cheeks and the top of the head so it isn't just like a little ball. and also, try to think of it this way~ you're drawing a real thing[kinda], and it should have a little bit more 'life' to it if you know what i mean. c:

this wasn't supposed to be taken in a mean way if you think it is! you asked for some criticism so i hope this is okay.

[keylimecoyote]

I didn't find it mean at all! This was from a while ago, so I might redo it :3
Thanks for the criticism!

[cardboardteeth]

okay! i'd love to see your improved product c:

[keylimecoyote]

Sweet. It's pretty late right now where I am, so I'll finish it tomorrow. (Remind me, because I will forget.)

[cardboardteeth]

remake this
you saID

i forgot to remind you haha,,

[keylimecoyote]

Oops
Going now XD

[cardboardteeth]

i'm waiting

i want to sEE IT