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Looking for critique by Spaceeboyyy

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Looking for critique

Postby Spaceeboyyy » Thu Mar 24, 2016 7:54 am

I want to improve but I'm not sure how, as far as anatomy goes. I feel like the head and hands are out of proportion but I'm not sure how to resize them?? The amount of times I tried to redraw the hands is not even funny. Is there some trick to getting them the right size? ;-;
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby 0Zero0 » Thu Mar 24, 2016 8:04 am

Well depends on the character, but hands are generally big small or anything, I usually just draw the square or circle just slightly bigger then the wrist and hope for the best to come out of it. these days its almost automatic and I don't know how.

Your heads don't seem out of proportion. its the necks and body. The shoulders on the female seem to big, and the neck on the male is to big. well I might make his head a little bigger but that isn't really necessary. The body either needs to be thinned out, or the legs to be lengthened. the right hand of the male could be shrunk very slightly but the rest of the hands look nice. Your proportions are awkward but your anatomy is great.

Keep trying really hard, this isn't bad! Connecting two characters and keeping proportion is really hard. Just keep studying your references and try try again. I think your on the right path to figuring out what you want from your art. You'll always find something funny or off about it, that's just the way we artists are. Like I said your anatomy is good, just your proportion is a bit wonky which most people have issues with.



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Re: Looking for critique

Postby ~Teya~ » Thu Mar 24, 2016 8:13 am

Doing hands just flat out sucks haha
Try looking at YouTube vids for hands ^^
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby ghhhhhellllppp » Thu Mar 24, 2016 8:15 am

Um no it's fine o,o
*tries to draw a human*
*Ends drawing*
*says to myself; What have I done??*
how bout nah
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Spaceeboyyy » Thu Mar 24, 2016 8:31 am

aah thanks everyone c:

and yeah, I've always had trouble with proportions. I'll keep working on it. Thank you so much for the suggestions! They're super helpful!
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nerd • archer • musician • a walking talking meme • blogger • taking commissions •
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