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Artist Burrito Bunny [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 50 minutes
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Burrito Bunny's Entry

Postby Burrito Bunny » Mon Mar 14, 2016 3:38 pm

It needs a lot of work still (it doesn't even have color layers yet), so it is far from finished. I just accidentally pressed "post now" when saving, so I guess I'm posting now, but I'll continue editing later. Yes, this was made with the touch pad of a lap top...so not the best. It will improve a lot before I'm finished.

What do you think of the feet/legs/shoulders/haunches/mouth/eye/the entire thing? Especially the feet-I was a little uncertain about what to do, but I just stuck something on there that made sense in my head.

Oh, also I will let you look at layers later. Right now I want to finish up some hidden ones more before showing them to you, just for my own sanity, since I'm not close to happy with any of my hidden lines. These ones are moderately okay.
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Re: Burrito Bunny's Entry

Postby Nanorat » Tue Mar 15, 2016 11:02 pm

The feet look good with the overall bulky look. Id suggest fixing the head shape to be more realistic (like the nose horn never has any curves in the middle, it's always straight, and the slope between forehead horn and face is too steep).
Id also suggest making the body joints fit tigher together. As of right now, it gives more of an "artificial" than insect look. :)
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Postby Burrito Bunny » Wed Mar 16, 2016 10:14 am

Ah, okay, thanks for the feed back! It is very helpful! c:
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