#4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa by Chronometer

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#4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby Chronometer » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:10 pm

I think a writing competition is in order.
To win, write a short story (300 - 500 words) about this tolter.
You can chose any topic you want c:

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Show Name (optional): The Queens Revolution
Barn Name: Eliza
Gender: Mare
Colour: Classic Cream Champagne Near-Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/nCr/ChCh/nLp [PATN1 patn1]
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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby defiance. » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:12 pm

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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby Vinson » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:12 pm

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Show Name: Those Green Eyes
Barn Name: Applewhite
Gender: mare
Colour: Classic Cream Champagne Near-Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/nCr/ChCh/nLp [PATN1 patn1]
Short Story: exactly 500 words
"Wow, she's a beauty! Where'd you get her from? Did you breed her?"
"No - no one knows where Applewhite came from. She was just...there in the pastures one day. We had her dna tested, it doesn't match up with any tolter. She's a mystery."

But Applewhite knows exactly where she came from.
She was wild once, living in a small herd at the edge of the mountains, hidden in the tall, sweeping grasses. Predators - mountain lions, wolves, lynx, they were a constant threat. But humans never were. Their little herd was so secluded, so small, that Applewhite had never layed eyes on a human until she was four. The humans, clearly lost, had stumbled upon the surprised herd in the middle of the night. And, being as lost as they were, they believed their eyes were playing tricks on them and carried on, past the horses.
But these strange creatures intrigued Applewhite. Why did they stand on two legs? Why did they garble their sounds? What were they even called?
Her dam answered only one question - they were called humans, and they were very bad.
And Applewhite trusted her dam, so she layed her curiosity down and continued her life as she had been living it.
But her natural curiosity took the better of her one day, and so she snuck off by herself to go find out what about the humans was so bad that her dam was scared of them. She traveled through the fields, following her imagination, until she reached the base of the mountain and suddenly she was scared and lonely and wanted to turn back - but she knew she couldn't. Not now that she had reached these beautiful, snow-capped peaks. And so, being the young tolter she was, decided she would walk around the mountain to the other side.
It took a long while to find a place where she could cut through, and even then she went sprawling once and came extremely close to not living a second longer. But she made it over. And the sight in front of her was magical.
A winding, gurgling river wove itself in front of her, mist rising in the early morning sunshine, dew on the reeds, snow on the trees. She loved it. And so she stayed there overnight, snoring under the shelter of a few blue spruces.
When she woke up, everything was coated in a fresh layer of snow. She freaked out a bit, then sighed and took in her new, bright white, surroundings.
And then she traveled onward, following the river, until she met a small lake in the middle of a pine forest. She walked a little ways forward, found a fence and an empty pasture.
She jumped the fence, and the next morning was when she officially met a human - who she now calls her owner. And her owner calls her Applewhite.
And Applewhite quite likes this new arrangement, no matter how odd her owner finds her appearance to be.
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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby ♥Meeshi♥ » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:17 pm

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Short Story;;
{1st person--Licia}
Just another day on the ranch, that's what I would have liked to think. The fresh smell of the new morning dew on the refreshed grass, and the small pitter patter of the rain in the mud. The taste of the soothing hay, and crunchy oats; the feel of fresh pine shaving under my hooves; the wet grass soaking my legs when I'd go to the pasture. No. Today was different. The feeling in the air was..humid, the rushing around of the people's feet, the frantic neighing of horses as they were quickly untacked and put in stalls filled with fresh bedding. But there was one small problem...no horses were ever ridden on Mondays. I couldn't help but want to panic as well. Everything was different now, they gave me less hay, less time to rest. The next thing I knew, I was in the isle, being tacked up by a young boy.

he had hair that was as orange as the moon in autumn, and a skin color as pale as the cold snow on a winter's evening. He worse a tight blue jacket, and some black breeches, with some tall black boots. He didn't have a helmet on yet, and i could see he was reaching for it in my peripheral vision. He soon put it on, clicking the two buckles. He then continued to groom my fur. It was aggravating, they changed the schedule again. My tail was lifted in fried anticipation at the thought of working today, and not to mention the girth. I wasn't ready for the girth yet, oh no! He began to sling it around my belly, moving to my left side, and I began to panic, my ears went back in fear, and i lifted my head, ready for the oncoming battle.

I felt it slowly tightening, and I finally held my breath. He changed from side to side, lifting the saddle saddle pad to adjust my girth. It got tighter, and tighter till I couldn't keep it any more. I let out a rough whinny and I backed up. I heard him telling my e softly to stand, but I fidgeted in my fur, and in the saddlepads and saddle that laid on my rounded back. When he tried to touch my head, I swung it away with a eye of white, panicked as I tried to get away.I'm not ready! I kept neighing. It's to early! I could only keep walking, only keep turning, and swinging my head, threatening to kick if needed. Till finally one of the people I knew stepped up and soothed me. They gently rubbed my forehead, and before I knew it, I was ready to go. The girth was tight, yeah, but I felt better now. She had given me a small peppermint candy cane to, so I wasn't to scared now, except for the fact, that because I hadn't behaved, the untightned girth could cause the small kid to fall off, and a big red welt would aspire right on his icy face.


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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby broken* » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:19 pm

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Colour: Classic Cream Champagne Near-Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/nCr/ChCh/nLp [PATN1 patn1]
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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby doglover947 » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:41 pm

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Barn Name: Cookie
Gender: female
Colour: Classic Cream Champagne Near-Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/nCr/ChCh/nLp [PATN1 patn1]
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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby Zira. » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:54 pm

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Show Name (optional): The Queens Revolution
Barn Name: Eliza
Gender: Mare
Colour: Classic Cream Champagne Near-Leopard Appaloosa
Genotype: Ee/aa/nCr/ChCh/nLp [PATN1 patn1]
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Eliza was born on a cold night and nearly died from the cold, but luckily for her, her mothers herd was there to help block out the cold. Growing up she was the daughter of the lead mare which gave her many privileges that the other fillies and colts did not have. She could get away with bossing around the older mares and even the herds stallions. She was very much a spoiled little princess. When a complaint was made against her behavior her mother simply shook her head and ignored the one complaining.

Almost two years old Eliza was still acting like the spoiled little princess she used to be instead of acting like a future lead mare. As her mothers eldest daughter she was destined to be the leader. The herd protested against her mothers decision and wanted her to name another filly as her successor, they even threatened to abandon the herd if Eliza became the leader. This made Eliza angry and bitter, she started to back off on her ways and acted more mature. Very slowly everyone else began to start to accept Eliza thinkING maybe she realized how she had acted. It wasn't until everyone changed how they acted towards her that Eliza finally realized that by acting nicer to everyone, they were nicer to her...
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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby Tazaria » Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:50 pm

Pulled out, thanks!
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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby Cardinal. » Sun Jan 10, 2016 6:19 am

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Golden Goddess, otherwise known as Ginger, stood gently grazing in her paddock. The sun is always glorious this time of year. The sweet, summer grasses are green and fresh, most with tiny dew drops clinging onto the tiny strands. Curling her lips around the green blades, Ginger tugs gently, pulling them from the soft soil and into her mouth, chewing slowly to savour the bitter sweet taste. A slight breeze dances with her mane and tale, emerald green eyes searched her paddock fences. Ginger had been waiting for apple tree, just beyond her borders to bare its juicy, yellow fruits.

Raising her large patterned head, Ginger marched her way towards the fruit bearing tree. "These fruits have to be ripe by now..." the golden mare mutter incoherently to herself, her eyes wide with anticipation as the breeze caused the tree's branches to waver slightly. Breathing a heavy sigh, Ginger glanced around herself, looking for a possible way to get to the fruits. "Maybe they are low hanging enough for me to reach?" She thought, standing on her tip toes, neck outstretched but to no avail. Standing comfortably, Ginger raised herself on her hind legs, stretching her neck once more but again to no avail. The jiggling fruit seemingly laughing at her petty attempts of ripping it from the tree's branches. Snorting in frustration, Ginger walked solemnly back to her original grazing spot. Once gain plucking at the fresh blades of grass.

A few minutes of blissful silence past, the yellow fruits still safely tucked away on the unreachable branches. Loud whinnies of excitement hit the golden mares ears, forcing them to twitch up with curiosity and her head following suit. The equines in the adjacent paddock were plucking up the fallen fruits, the sweet juices falling in small streams from their mouths. Ginger, whinnied gently towards them, hoping to gain their attention as she trotted forward excitedly. The others stared blankly at her, whispers forming among their small group of three. "Are you willing to share those?" Ginger asked softly, lowering her head slightly, "I've been trying to reach those all day..." She explained further. A confused look flashed across the youngest ones face before disappearing. The adolescent snorted gently, "Sure there is plenty to go around." He whinnied with a small, using his nose to nudge the fruit towards the fence boundary.

Taking the fruit in her mouth, Ginger bit into the soft yet crunchy flesh. Enjoying the sweet flavour that washes over her mouth. "These are my favourite!" One of the other equines mentions with excitement. Grinning widely, "Those are my favouri..." Juice fell from her lips as she spoke, Ginger just catching it as the younger equine laughed with her. "Favourite to!" Ginger finished her sentence with a sheepish grin. "I'm Sonny by the way." He introduces himself. "Ginger." The golden mare replies, both continue laughing at each others antics as they stuff their faces with fruit.

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Re: #4403 Classic Cream Champagne Appaloosa

Postby Yodel » Mon Jan 18, 2016 9:21 am

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Gender: Mare
Colour: Classic Cream Champagne Near-Leopard Appaloosa
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