[Luff]

*MODS PLEASE COULD YOU MOVE THIS TO EDITABLE? THANKIES!*

Trying to write a story for school.. getting my creativity flowing.. I hope you like it!!

Please criticize - I am probably gonna make lines out of it & make it editable.. If I have time..

~Me.

[Xx_Bex_xX]

omg,
Thtas amazing

[Luff]

Thanks! ^^ Anyone have any crit?

[Birdfly]

Awesome!

[Luff]

Should I make it editable as is? I kinda don't have time to make a lineart.

[Xx_Bex_xX]

Should I make it editable as is? I kinda don't have time to make a lineart.

Ya Totally, I Will Be First To Colour XD xx

[MC mango]

All I can say is, I think maybe the neck is too long, I think.

But, hey, don't worry, its a difficult pose. :3
It's still nice.

[Luff]

All I can say is, I think maybe the neck is too long, I think.

But, hey, don't worry, its a difficult pose. :3
It's still nice.

LOL yes.. I had no space left.. and because it isn't Photoshop I couldn't resize the layer so I had to just do what I could to salvage the body.. ^^

[Luff]

[Le Feu De Mort]

ya, it looks great! And the only thing I would suggest has already been suggested, not that I could do that well on a computer!