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My gallery · by **Naxa** » Sun Nov 22, 2015 2:12 pm

ok, on this page i want HONEST thoughts....i need to know what to add :Naxa: better backgrounds?
:Me: shut it Nax...

so please i'm looking for criticism here XD soo....please leave your opinions below...you don't have to though XD
you can just comment XD

Jack: no...
Lennox: uhm....i found it in the carriage i-i think it was his....

My gallery · by **Captain Plucky** » Sun Nov 22, 2015 5:14 pm

Well, if you insist XD I'd say maybe work on the dialogue text for the word bubbles. Even though you show what they're saying in the post below, it wouldn't hurt. I guess backround too XD and...maybe also hands, or something XD.Well, that's about it! Otherwise your doing great! Way better than when you started long Rivals! :thumbup:

My gallery · by **Naxa** » Mon Nov 23, 2015 9:34 am

DragonGirl987 wrote:Well, if you insist XD I'd say maybe work on the dialogue text for the word bubbles. Even though you show what they're saying in the post below, it wouldn't hurt. I guess backround too XD and...maybe also hands, or something XD.Well, that's about it! Otherwise your doing great! Way better than when you started long Rivals!

got it
Fix word bubbles
More background details

thanks for the advice! and comment

My gallery · by **snyzzle** » Thu Nov 26, 2015 11:00 am

maybe link to previous pages/chapters?

My gallery · by **Naxa** » Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:31 pm

snyzzle wrote:maybe link to previous pages/chapters?

yeah my brother keeps pointing that out XD
i'll work on that..
also
and some of the previous pages speech bubbles and backgrounds have been upgraded

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