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Doodlin' by Caela

Artist Caela [gallery]
Time spent 47 minutes
Drawing sessions 4
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Doodlin'

Postby Caela » Fri Nov 20, 2015 3:21 pm

Yeahhhh I need to draw people more often, lol. Mods, feel free to move this to Sketches. :D

This was pretty fun, though! The timer is a little off, and the number of drawings sessions is definitely off -- I did this in one sitting. :)

Critique would be appreciated! I have no idea what I'm doing, lol.
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Re: Doodlin'

Postby Dreamo » Fri Nov 20, 2015 3:23 pm

I really love the overall sketch, but going into it deeper I have a little advice ;)

I would add a little more volume to the hair, and make the blonde and brown blend a little :)
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Re: Doodlin'

Postby ShadyBro » Fri Nov 20, 2015 3:43 pm

Ah that is a stunning profile, I can never do side views on humans right XD

And the shading/color is amazing, Im really diggin that style!

I would say that the hair is a little off. It looks sorta like its only rooted right at the forehead like they do on dolls. Pulling it back a bit farther as well as showing some areas where the hair is shorter near the face may help that. As Dreamo said, volume ^^
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Re: Doodlin'

Postby hojicha » Fri Nov 20, 2015 4:28 pm

This is beautiful!
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