Silly Goose, Of Course I Love You! by ❣D o l l❣

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Silly Goose, Of Course I Love You!

Postby ❣D o l l❣ » Sun Nov 15, 2015 2:16 pm

Citrine looked up at Minutes, her eyes soft and wide like a newborn deer's eyes. "Minutes?" her voice was soft and tender, which always melted Minutes' soft heart. "Yes, Citrine?" he mumbled quietly. "Why do you love me?" "What do you mean?" "I have so many insecurities. So many, too many to count! How do you find this appealing?" "I-" "I'm friends with Julie. You HATE her!" "Hate's such a strong-" "My Flaws My- My- My" Citrine finally quieted down, but she was now crying, blue tears streaking down her pale yellow fur. "Oh, love." Minutes mumblued softly. "I love you for you, everyone has flaws but that's what makes them unique!" he chimed. "I have mine as well, you know that just as well as I do." He kissed the top of her head. "Hush now." his voice was soft and humble. Citrine smiled softly and looked up.


That was that. uh. Does CS have a place specifically where you can write stories? I've been wondering since I've just been writing stories in my posts.
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Re: Silly Goose, Of Course I Love You!

Postby Programmer » Sun Nov 15, 2015 2:47 pm

Yes, it does! The board is here, for just writing in particular..

That writing was pretty cute!
But... may I make a suggestion, to improve how easy it is to read? If so, do each character's spoken words on a new line. (It's actually the 'god format', used by all books and articles, since it's easier to read.)
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Re: Silly Goose, Of Course I Love You!

Postby ❣D o l l❣ » Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:55 pm

Thankyou!!
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