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MWK #24

Postby Expresso. » Sat Oct 31, 2015 4:24 pm

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    Milky way kits are foxes with a flowy galaxy tail. Their orbs contain the essence of their galaxies. According to legend, Milky way kits are believed to have come from the stars, leaving a trail of colorful dust and stars behind them as they moved across the universe.
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This one is a ghost themed MWK with a rare white tail. She had a previous relationship with MWK #25, Viscount and her orb has been stolen by him!
Give me a story about how she feels after her orb has been stolen. Extras and pretty up allowed

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Aggie Grad wrote:Username: Aggie Grad
Name: Adeline
Gender: female
Story:
"Well, it certainly didn't feel good to have my heart ripped and torn from my body." She confessed to a friend. "What do you mean? It wasn't like you actually liked him." Her friend asked, tilting her head slightly. "No, no. It wasn't that. I have had something stolen from me. Something more dear to me than anything ever before." Adeline said, sighing, raising her head, black pits of eyes staring up at the endless expanse of grey sky, which was threatening to rain down on them. Her memory was beginning to overcome her, showing this sad story once more.


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She made her way through the thick fog, trying her best not to trip over stones and roots that blocked her path. "Viscount!" She called, her voice a smooth, silky tone. Viscount was one of her best friends, and some often assumed that they were lovers. She wouldn't even think to entertain the thought of it.
She didn't notice the looming shape behind he as she thought these thoughts, and soon the deep voice she had come to know so well echoed softly in her ear. "What do you need, my dear?" She jumped slightly, before frowning. "I told you to stop doing that." She said as a smirk rose to his face. "Anyways." She said, regaining her composure. "I need to ask a favor of you." She said, and he tilted his head. "And what might you need?" He asked.

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She had hated the thought of taking something of his, but she needed it for a good purpose. Two months had passed, and she was on her way back to return his item. She was once again stuck walking through the foggy woods, and this time she kept a better lookout for him. She saw a looming shape approaching her. "You can't scare me this time, Viscount." She said, but soon realized it wasn't her friend.
It sprung at her, claws outstretched. It was a dark creature, with massive claws that flashed like obsidian in the moonlight filled air. She screamed, and then ducked, barely dodging the creature. It was unlike anything she had seen before. She raced off through the woods, breathing heavily. She had managed to put a distance between her and the creature of the night, its dark pelt flashing slightly as it passed under patches of moonlight that managed to reach through the trees. "Viscount!" She screamed. "Visc-!" She was cut off as her forepaw got stuck under a root, and she rolled across the forest floor, a fiery pain exploding in her ankle.
She whimpered, before closing her eyes as the creature closed in on her. She flinched as she awaited a blow, but none came, and she opened one eye to see that the creature was gone, but Viscount was there, his muzzle hovering above her swollen ankle. "It is gone. Do not worry anymore, Adeline." He said, and she closed her eyes.


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She narrowed her eyes against the glare of the sun, which was seeping in through silken curtains. She looked around surprised, before wincing as she tried to push herself up with the injured forepaw. "I wouldn't mess with your forepaw. You twisted it very badly. Luckily it was no worse." The voice boomed as he drew nearer to the white female. She watched him closely. "I should be going." She said, but he shook his head. "Not so quick, dearest." He said, pushing her back down. "You are not well enough for that." He said with a small smirk.
She seemed confused by his sudden actions, but obeyed, and laid back down, nestling back in to rest, which she quickly found, suddenly realizing how tired she truly was.


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It had been a month now, and the two were closer than ever. Though, she needed to leave, as she had other places to be. But, he wanted her to stay, and had a plan to get her to do so. "Adeline. Before you leave, I have something to ask of you." He said. He seemed nervous to an extent, and she tilted her head. "Do speak your mind." She said, and he looked towards her. "I have loved this past month with you, and I was wondering one thing." He said. "Well, go on. Spit it out." She said after a few moments hesitation. "I was wondering if you wanted to stay here with me. Stay here and be my mate forever and always." He said, and she seemed shocked.
She paused for a few moments. "I am sorry, Viscount, but I must decline your offer. I do not love you in that manner." She said to the male, and then stepped forward, seeing the anger rising to his eyes. "We can still be friends though." She said, and he didn't seem to want to hear that, as he swung a paw through the air, colliding with her cheek, knocking her to the floor. "How dare y-!" She was cut off as he snarled, ripping the orb from her neck.
"You have stolen something precious from me, so I shall do the same to you." He said, before disappearing. Blood dripped to the floor from her cheek, and it mixed with the salty tears that streamed down her face. She wept for hours, for what felt like days for her. Her best friend was not only lost, but her orb was lost as well. She didn't know which was worse, as the pain seemed to mix together inside her, not distinguished between the two sources in the least.
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Re: MWK #24

Postby Chimericect » Sat Oct 31, 2015 4:33 pm

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Re: MWK #24

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Sat Oct 31, 2015 4:58 pm

Username: Aggie Grad
Name: Adeline
Gender: female
Story:
"Well, it certainly didn't feel good to have my heart ripped and torn from my body." She confessed to a friend. "What do you mean? It wasn't like you actually liked him." Her friend asked, tilting her head slightly. "No, no. It wasn't that. I have had something stolen from me. Something more dear to me than anything ever before." Adeline said, sighing, raising her head, black pits of eyes staring up at the endless expanse of grey sky, which was threatening to rain down on them. Her memory was beginning to overcome her, showing this sad story once more.


--------

She made her way through the thick fog, trying her best not to trip over stones and roots that blocked her path. "Viscount!" She called, her voice a smooth, silky tone. Viscount was one of her best friends, and some often assumed that they were lovers. She wouldn't even think to entertain the thought of it.
She didn't notice the looming shape behind he as she thought these thoughts, and soon the deep voice she had come to know so well echoed softly in her ear. "What do you need, my dear?" She jumped slightly, before frowning. "I told you to stop doing that." She said as a smirk rose to his face. "Anyways." She said, regaining her composure. "I need to ask a favor of you." She said, and he tilted his head. "And what might you need?" He asked.

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She had hated the thought of taking something of his, but she needed it for a good purpose. Two months had passed, and she was on her way back to return his item. She was once again stuck walking through the foggy woods, and this time she kept a better lookout for him. She saw a looming shape approaching her. "You can't scare me this time, Viscount." She said, but soon realized it wasn't her friend.
It sprung at her, claws outstretched. It was a dark creature, with massive claws that flashed like obsidian in the moonlight filled air. She screamed, and then ducked, barely dodging the creature. It was unlike anything she had seen before. She raced off through the woods, breathing heavily. She had managed to put a distance between her and the creature of the night, its dark pelt flashing slightly as it passed under patches of moonlight that managed to reach through the trees. "Viscount!" She screamed. "Visc-!" She was cut off as her forepaw got stuck under a root, and she rolled across the forest floor, a fiery pain exploding in her ankle.
She whimpered, before closing her eyes as the creature closed in on her. She flinched as she awaited a blow, but none came, and she opened one eye to see that the creature was gone, but Viscount was there, his muzzle hovering above her swollen ankle. "It is gone. Do not worry anymore, Adeline." He said, and she closed her eyes.


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She narrowed her eyes against the glare of the sun, which was seeping in through silken curtains. She looked around surprised, before wincing as she tried to push herself up with the injured forepaw. "I wouldn't mess with your forepaw. You twisted it very badly. Luckily it was no worse." The voice boomed as he drew nearer to the white female. She watched him closely. "I should be going." She said, but he shook his head. "Not so quick, dearest." He said, pushing her back down. "You are not well enough for that." He said with a small smirk.
She seemed confused by his sudden actions, but obeyed, and laid back down, nestling back in to rest, which she quickly found, suddenly realizing how tired she truly was.


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It had been a month now, and the two were closer than ever. Though, she needed to leave, as she had other places to be. But, he wanted her to stay, and had a plan to get her to do so. "Adeline. Before you leave, I have something to ask of you." He said. He seemed nervous to an extent, and she tilted her head. "Do speak your mind." She said, and he looked towards her. "I have loved this past month with you, and I was wondering one thing." He said. "Well, go on. Spit it out." She said after a few moments hesitation. "I was wondering if you wanted to stay here with me. Stay here and be my mate forever and always." He said, and she seemed shocked.
She paused for a few moments. "I am sorry, Viscount, but I must decline your offer. I do not love you in that manner." She said to the male, and then stepped forward, seeing the anger rising to his eyes. "We can still be friends though." She said, and he didn't seem to want to hear that, as he swung a paw through the air, colliding with her cheek, knocking her to the floor. "How dare y-!" She was cut off as he snarled, ripping the orb from her neck.
"You have stolen something precious from me, so I shall do the same to you." He said, before disappearing. Blood dripped to the floor from her cheek, and it mixed with the salty tears that streamed down her face. She wept for hours, for what felt like days for her. Her best friend was not only lost, but her orb was lost as well. She didn't know which was worse, as the pain seemed to mix together inside her, not distinguished between the two sources in the least.
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Re: MWK #24

Postby AngryLittleGoat » Sat Oct 31, 2015 5:04 pm

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Name: Chelisa (cheh-lee-suh) (Chosen because the hair reminds me of a Chinese Crested.)
Gender: female
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All of us come from the stars. However, few of us are born of them...
Chelisa was not much one for pack life. She felt little attachment to the others around her, probably due to her being shunned for her albinistic fur. Over time, only one kit had ever caught her eye... she'd tried to participate in pack life, she really had! But he'd not been in it for the reasons she was. He'd just wanted to betray her... the first chance he'd gotten, he stole her orb.

She decided that rather than fight him, she'd return to the stars. His betrayal had hit her hard. Rather than continue to live in such a wretched place, she left. She found that wandering in the asteroid belts was much preferable to chasing boys. After all, they were grey, icy chunks of rock, as cold as her ex's heart! And as beautiful and silent as the stars from which she'd come. But sometimes... just sometimes... the icy rocks reminded her of her lost orb, and she'd shed a single tear for the life she'd left behind.
And fewer still return to them.

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Re: MWK #24

Postby Pastellu » Sat Oct 31, 2015 5:19 pm

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Name:Angel
Gender: female
Story:Angel always thought she was scary when she was a little kit. She'd scare away so many things from just them looking at her when she lifted up her hair that she couldn't take it any longer. Angel was always left out of activities in her childhood; there was even a rumor that went around saying that if you touched Angel, she'd haunt you in your dreams, which made Angel feel even more lonelier, but all of this changed years later. The rumor was long gone by now, but still, no one ever talked to her, all except for one male kit. He was the only one who treated her equally to the others, which Angel appreciated a lot. Then, one day, Angel woke up to her orb necklace missing. This has never happened before to Angel, and she did not see her kit friend after that. She was infuriated with confusion and anger and sadness. Only one kit in her life that made it worth living just did it for her necklace. Merciless. To this day, angel swears that if she ever sees the kit again, she'll show them what it's like to suffer the pain of loneliness and weakness.

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Re: MWK #24

Postby Sathalina » Sat Oct 31, 2015 6:35 pm

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Name: Lilith
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Story: It was like a dream, being with him; it was like nothing I've ever had before.
I still remember the day ever-so-clearly, when i lost the one thing that made me who I was.
He stole my heart, and my light.
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Re: MWK #24

Postby Levina » Sat Oct 31, 2015 6:50 pm

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Name: Catori, 'Cat' for short meaning spirit.
Gender: female
Story:
She didn't expect it would happen to her. Something as rare as that, with the chances so slim she didn't even consider it as a possibility. Her precious orb that once drifted around her neck got seized from her. Kits look at her with either sympathy or disgust, as if to say 'how could she be so careless?' She was as white as snow but her eyes were as black as night. Although she has given up trying to gain justice, every night she still thinks about what she had once looked like, but the memory fades with each passing day.

Leaves began to change to shades of red and brown as autumn crept in, the sun was shining in the sky but a chill still lurked in the air. Cat laid on her back, looking at the passing clouds. A gentle breeze brushed against her fur. She took a deep breath in, inhaling the scent of autumn. Cats eyes fluttered shut, the touch of her lover by her side.
"You alright?" He whispered in her ear.
She didn't reply, only open her eyes to the sight of an concerned viscount.
"Catori what's wrong?"
"Nothing," She responded slowly making her way to her feet "Just a little tired, that's all." Cat stretched her legs, letting out a yawn.
"Oh, have you got a cold?" Viscount sounded suspicious of her sudden sleepiness, his eyes narrowed slightly but she had noticed he always had done this when he was wary. He observed her carefully, head tilted slightly.
"As far as i'm concerned I haven't," She started and could tell he wasn't buying it "but I think I may be coming down with something." Cat gave a little sniff of her nose to sound more convincing.
"Alright then..."
"I'll talk to you later, yeah?"
"Mmm" He replied, pulling her into a hug before leaving.
She sighed before heading back home. Catori had no idea how to tell him that she no longer loved him. The relationship didn't seem to work anymore and just seemed more of a game to her than love. Yes, she did care about him and wanted to remain as friends but it would only be awkward if they were to stay together. She took a shortcut. Trees towered over her and leaves rained down from the sky. The leaves crunched as she roamed over them. It was a lovely place to walk down in all times of the year and was a small joy of her life. Approaching her house, Cat got out her silver keys out. They jingled in her hand as she pushed them into the lock. There was a click, she shifted the door open. Her house was warm compared to the autumn chill outside. Cat curled up on the sofa, pulling her grey blanket on top of her. It was a long day, and she had still not sorted things out with Viscount. "Tomorrow I will," she said drowsily "Tomorrow."

A knock at the door woke Catori up, she blinked twice looking around her. "I fell asleep on the sofa again, didn't I?" she told herself getting up to open the door, Cat brushed her paws through her hair to make herself look at least half decent. She opened the door, but her heart sank as she came face to face with Viscount. 'No, I can't do it now.' she thought to herself.
"I-uh brought you some soup, to help with the cold.' He held up the brown paper bag before she indicated for him to come in.
Her pulse raced as she remembered her promise to herself.
"Are you feeling better today?" He asked.
Cat sighed before replying "Can I-I talk to you, please?" She was almost certain her nerves were showing through.
"Yeah, what's wrong?" He asked.
"I'm not i'll," Catori blurted out, she could see the confused face on Viscount beginning to grow. "I only said that because I wanted to go home."
"W-why?"
She took a deep breath in before spitting out the truth. "I don't think this relationship is working, I don't know if you're happy but I'm not and it's not going anywhere. I-I think it's for the best and we'll be better off without each other." Her heart pounded against her chest. He didn't say anything for a while. 'Please say something, I want this to be over.' Cat thought to herself, heat creeping up her neck.
"Catori I loved you..." He whispered, almost inaudibly. She could feel her heart sink, guilt in the pit of her stomach for doing that to him. Cat felt his paw on the back of her neck, she closed her eyes hoping he would say goodbye and it would be over. Instead, he removed her orb from her in one swift movement.
"I loved you! And you took my heart and threw it away like it was nothing!" His voice was roaring now. Cat could feel herself instantly get weaker, she trembled as she saw his enraged face.
"Please!" She pleaded "It's not too late, I did love you! Please, don't end it like this my love."
"I am no longer your lover." He said bitterly, taking her orb and walking out.
"Your heart Is as cold as ice!" She yelled, tears streaming down her pale face "You will never be the same, I hope your life is filled with guilt and regret!"
Viscount shut the door behind him, leaving his betrayed lover behind.

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Re: MWK #24

Postby kamelgirl » Sat Oct 31, 2015 11:44 pm

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Re: MWK #24

Postby Daytime-Despair » Sun Nov 01, 2015 12:21 am

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Story: Eris was once a beautiful maiden, with her white coat being rare and reflecting the light beautifully, and was sought after by lots of males, but she always rejected them. She said she embraced the free life, and didn't want to have someone to look after. However, she fell in love with The Viscount, his black colours going well with her white, but her previous rejection of love made it awkward. But finally, she talked to him and to her joy, he accepted her love. They went out together for about a year, and by that time the whole pack knew and were surprised that the maiden who had once shunned love had fallen. However, the pair wasn't meant to last.

On the night of their anniversary, they had went too see a meteor shower. None would be MWKs, but it was beautiful none the less. She fell asleep, and woke up to find her mate gone, as well as her orb. She was heartbroken, and returned to her pack. Her mate had been banished, but they said it was her fault for letting him commit the crime. Already saddened by the betrayal of her mate, and with the added hate of her pack, she ran away and, unfortunately, committed suicide. Instead of going to the stars like she wished, she woke up as a ghost. She now roams the Earth, searching for her mate and her orb. What she shall do once she completes her mission? Maybe she'll return to the stars after so long. Maybe she'd get her orb and come back to life. Or maybe she'll curse her mate for all the hateship caused from him;
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Re: MWK #24

Postby Ill » Sun Nov 01, 2015 4:22 am

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