any suggestions to make it better?
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Anime eye attempt #2 by BriSmiles
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Anime eye attempt #2
by BriSmiles » Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:17 am
I improved my old drawing a little any suggestions to make it better?
any suggestions to make it better?
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tasy. i aspire one day to be an author,
that would be a dream come true. jus
t to throw it out, i am a proud pansexual
and there is no turning back. i l
ove life, and i hope someday, everyon
e will too!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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tasy. i aspire one day to be an author,
that would be a dream come true. jus
t to throw it out, i am a proud pansexual
and there is no turning back. i l
ove life, and i hope someday, everyon
e will too!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Re: Anime eye attempt #2
by *galaxies* » Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:18 am
I think it's amazing! awesome job!!!
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Re: Anime eye attempt #2
by .:chained:. » Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:21 am
let's see
next time you could draw the lower part of the eye/the whole eye outline, draw the pupil, less transparent eye shine, and eyelashes on just one side.
next time you could draw the lower part of the eye/the whole eye outline, draw the pupil, less transparent eye shine, and eyelashes on just one side.
Last edited by .:chained:. on Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥.·:*:·.♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥
яυи αωαу ωιтн мє
ℓσѕт ѕσυℓѕ αи∂ яєνєяιє
яυииιиg ωιℓ∂ αи∂ яυииιиg fяєє
тωσ кι∂ѕ, уσυ αи∂ мє
αи∂ ι ѕαу нєу, нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ
нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ яєиєgα∂єѕ, яєиєgα∂єѕ
♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥.·:*:·.♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥
яυи αωαу ωιтн мє
ℓσѕт ѕσυℓѕ αи∂ яєνєяιє
яυииιиg ωιℓ∂ αи∂ яυииιиg fяєє
тωσ кι∂ѕ, уσυ αи∂ мє
αи∂ ι ѕαу нєу, нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ
нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ яєиєgα∂єѕ, яєиєgα∂єѕ
♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥.·:*:·.♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥
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Re: Anime eye attempt #2
by BriSmiles » Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:22 am
Aww thanks! 
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ＡＬＩＶＥ，
─────────────────────hello my name is Pan•Bri•Sexual, but you can call me bri. i am a proud love
r of writing small romances and fanta
tasy. i aspire one day to be an author,
that would be a dream come true. jus
t to throw it out, i am a proud pansexual
and there is no turning back. i l
ove life, and i hope someday, everyon
e will too!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
─────────────────────r of writing small romances and fanta
tasy. i aspire one day to be an author,
that would be a dream come true. jus
t to throw it out, i am a proud pansexual
and there is no turning back. i l
ove life, and i hope someday, everyon
e will too!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P A N ＰＲＩＤＥ
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Re: Anime eye attempt #2
by .:chained:. » Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:22 am
you're welcome ^^
♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥.·:*:·.♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥
яυи αωαу ωιтн мє
ℓσѕт ѕσυℓѕ αи∂ яєνєяιє
яυииιиg ωιℓ∂ αи∂ яυииιиg fяєє
тωσ кι∂ѕ, уσυ αи∂ мє
αи∂ ι ѕαу нєу, нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ
нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ яєиєgα∂єѕ, яєиєgα∂єѕ
♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥.·:*:·.♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥
яυи αωαу ωιтн мє
ℓσѕт ѕσυℓѕ αи∂ яєνєяιє
яυииιиg ωιℓ∂ αи∂ яυииιиg fяєє
тωσ кι∂ѕ, уσυ αи∂ мє
αи∂ ι ѕαу нєу, нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ
нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу нєу ℓινιиg ℓιкє ωє'яє яєиєgα∂єѕ яєиєgα∂єѕ, яєиєgα∂єѕ
♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥.·:*:·.♥.·:*¨¨*:·.♥
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Re: Anime eye attempt #2
by BriSmiles » Fri Oct 23, 2015 7:23 am
brooken wrote:let's see
next time you could draw the lower part of the eye/the whole eye outline, draw the pupil, less transparent eye shine, and eyelashes on just one side.
Heh alrighty
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─────────────────────hello my name is Pan•Bri•Sexual, but you can call me bri. i am a proud love
r of writing small romances and fanta
tasy. i aspire one day to be an author,
that would be a dream come true. jus
t to throw it out, i am a proud pansexual
and there is no turning back. i l
ove life, and i hope someday, everyon
e will too!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
─────────────────────r of writing small romances and fanta
tasy. i aspire one day to be an author,
that would be a dream come true. jus
t to throw it out, i am a proud pansexual
and there is no turning back. i l
ove life, and i hope someday, everyon
e will too!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P A N ＰＲＩＤＥ
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