[Veggiegirl]

Sorry for the Egyptain theme, but I've been reading Egyptian mythology again. So anyway, this is my funky-animal-eared version of Anput, who is Anubis's wife. And a cute little Pharoah hound :3, which were popular in Egypt (even though they were actually bred in Malta). The symbol on her necklace is Anubis/Anput (they're the same deity, only male/female versions), just to throw a heiroglyph in there.

[julie-chan]

(Walema that's kinda rude)

cute!
I think you should probably start in Beginners Oekaki first.

[wittebane]

((Quite a bit rude, actually.))

I like this! It might not be intermediate..but I still really like it!

[.:Haru:.]

Guys you don't need to say "it's not intermediate worthy" if the mods feel it is not intermediate they will move it no need to say anything about it without giving any critique or help I personally think it is intermediate :3

[nightbeat]

I think it belongs here too. C:

Adorable! <33 I love the hound. :3

[Veggiegirl]

No, that's totally ok. What specifically should I work on, just so I can improve? Thanks for telling me though :3

Mods please move to beginner's?

[HoneyWolf]

It truely is beautiful, and really just almost belongs on intermediate. Don't feel bad, I wouldn't be able to do any better xD

Just some critiques for help, maybe a slight more detail and anatomy changes. I don't know if you already do this, but it's very helpful if you use references. What I sometimes do is I look at the most similar picture to what I just drew that I can find and compare it, like did I put enough details like this one or did I make the head the perfect size like this one. It's hard to explain, but it's very useful.

I swear that in no time you'll be back on intermediate ^.^

[wittebane]

I really do not have any specific critiques on how you could make it intermediate. I thought it was to start with..maybe add more detail and shading?

[iPawki]

The girl's so pretty.
Just a few suggestions, even though I believe it belongs in intermediate:
Perhaps add more shading- I think very soft shading would work here. And since they're in the desert you could put some reflection of light, to prove that's it's very warm, etc.
Also, the lines seem a little bit bulky, perhaps you could make the edges a bit more thin, because at the neck and a few pieces of the bangs end very... abruptly? I don't know.

[rosesgreedy]

there ia a soda...thing called Malta{this thing~ http://robrohan.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/web.jpg} (in Cuba) i tryed. anywho, i <3 the pic XD