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I'm drawing something by tweedie

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I'm drawing something

Postby tweedie » Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:01 pm

Experiment-y drawing.
I was doing to draw a panda but that did not work well so here you have it, whoopie.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
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Re: I'm drawing something

Postby ジョジョ » Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:04 pm

I think the anatomy of the hand is actually really great!

I'm an artist too, and hands are the WORST part of drawing for me,
but you managed to grasp it here!

I think criticism-wise, the only thing I could really pick out was just the linework.
It's messy, but I think with some smoother lines you're well on your way to some awesome art!✩















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Re: I'm drawing something

Postby Svel » Sun Jul 12, 2015 10:05 pm

I tried drawing my other hand "drawing" (It was really just holding a pencil) a few months back, didn't work so well haha

As for criticism, I'd say that the width of the index finger (near the proximal phalange) looks a little wonky, and more detail could have been added to the thumb to make it look bent.

Pretty good work though!
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Re: I'm drawing something

Postby tweedie » Sun Jul 12, 2015 11:27 pm

@arqangelic
@Svel

I took both your suggestions and did a little edit. Not too much edit done but thank you for your feedback!
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