FINALLY!! This took me forever!!!!!!! I started the sketch a while back and didn't get it finished til the 18th of September. It was extremely hard for me to draw this, and I have no idea why. It looked waaaaay better on paper viewtopic.php?t=261591
Anyways, here is the first page of Breaking Point. I wanted to begin it off in the middle of the story so that while your uncovering his future, your discovering his past. [as you read]
Right now Jeremy is in Germany in the middle of the night looking for a suitable body guard when he comes across Zehn (who just happens to be a body guard.) Zehn is a very up tight and loyal character. He normally doesn't get scared but he is put off by Jeremy a little. Infact, his smirk almost paralyzes Zehn (as you can see in the last box up thar.)
and if you don't know what an Atrox is: viewtopic.php?t=252179
also, for you guys that don't know German, "was" means "what". It's not a grammar mistake, I gave Zehn a dialogue that mixes some German into his English.
COMMENTS AND CRITIQUES WANTED A LOT! Please.





