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Breaking Point Pt 1 by nolongeractive-

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Time spent 3 hours, 39 minutes
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Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby nolongeractive- » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:28 pm

FINALLY!! This took me forever!!!!!!! I started the sketch a while back and didn't get it finished til the 18th of September. It was extremely hard for me to draw this, and I have no idea why. It looked waaaaay better on paper viewtopic.php?t=261591

Anyways, here is the first page of Breaking Point. I wanted to begin it off in the middle of the story so that while your uncovering his future, your discovering his past. [as you read]

Right now Jeremy is in Germany in the middle of the night looking for a suitable body guard when he comes across Zehn (who just happens to be a body guard.) Zehn is a very up tight and loyal character. He normally doesn't get scared but he is put off by Jeremy a little. Infact, his smirk almost paralyzes Zehn (as you can see in the last box up thar.)

and if you don't know what an Atrox is: viewtopic.php?t=252179
also, for you guys that don't know German, "was" means "what". It's not a grammar mistake, I gave Zehn a dialogue that mixes some German into his English.

COMMENTS AND CRITIQUES WANTED A LOT! Please.
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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:30 am

No one? really? :cry:

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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby Ananda Regalia » Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:54 am

*Screams!* MUST HAVE MORE COMIC! (Say hello to the insane graphic novel fangirl)
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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:37 am

hello insane graphic novel fangirl XD

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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby Ananda Regalia » Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:37 am

lol. Hey, completely random and off-topic question, have you read Elf Quest? It is a series of graphic novels, (AND IT ROCKS!)
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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:39 am

No. I don't read much.

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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby Ananda Regalia » Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:42 am

*GASP*
You need to read Elf Quest! OO! And Bone! (I am a freaky obsessed reader (and for those of you who think comics and Graphic novels are just for people who can't read, your wrong, they are just a different style okay? And they are awesome. I read books too, but my newest obsession is GNs(Graphic novels(QUADRUPLE PARENTHESIS!(Must. Stop. Writing. In. Parentheses!))))) < I'm a freak, I know.
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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:44 am

That's okay XD I've read Bone before though. it was okay. Just not my genre.

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Re: Breaking Point Pt 1

Postby Zella<3 » Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:13 am

Yay epic comic by the EpicCrowbar!! Yayz!!
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