[BlondeChick]

This is my little critter, Kotah. Her hair is 10x longer then it is in this picture. If I made this into a species, would anyone want to adopt? Not saying that this will become a specie.

Constructive Criticism would be great ^-^

[Mythic]

This is super cute! I wish I could give you any criticism, but everything looks fine. I think some of it is just personal style and that's fine! :3

Maybe try to make the lines smoother. I think there is a tool in oekaki that makes the lines a lot more smooth, but I could be mistaken.