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Hey there! So, this is my first adopt. I know personally what I based this off of, but I want to know what the first thing that comes too mind when you see this is. Also: this will have no effect on judging, I swear, but I want to hear your feedback. What could I have done better, what could I have added, that kind of thing. This will help me as an artist. I will end this on March 20 or when I get 10 entries.

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Username:
Name:
Gender of TZL:
What you think this is based off of:
Personality:

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Okay, I will end this after two forms.

[~Indian pony~]

Username:~Indian pony~
Name: Into Infinity
Gender of TZL: Female
What you think this is based off of: It reminds me of aurora borealis
Personality: Infinity is a tricky personality, she's outgoing and sometimes just a touch reckless but huge crowds tire her. She needs to recharge after being around many people. She's a bit of a dreamer, and always curious about new things. So many things she wants to see!

Feedback: It looks quite good to me but I'm really no artist, I am only semi decent at horses xD

[WolvesOfFire]

Username: IceWingDragonet
Name: Eternal Skies
Gender of TZL: female
What do you think this is based off of? Ummmmm a sky lioness. Sky because the coloring.
Personality: she's feisty and headstrong, and won't have others tell her no. She's loyal and fights for what she believes in. She's stubborn and nothing will change her mind once she's set it to something. She's a bit edgy around crowds, and has been called 'rude' because she's often sarcastic.
Feedback: this is a gorgeous peace of artwork, I love the coloring on its rump. As for critiques, I think it's pretty much perfect.

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Username:~Indian pony~
Name: Into Infinity
Gender of TZL: Female
What you think this is based off of: It reminds me of aurora borealis
Personality: Infinity is a tricky personality, she's outgoing and sometimes just a touch reckless but huge crowds tire her. She needs to recharge after being around many people. She's a bit of a dreamer, and always curious about new things. So many things she wants to see!

Feedback: It looks quite good to me but I'm really no artist, I am only semi decent at horses xD

You win her! I based her roughly off of a peacock, but I can totally see where you got Aurora Borealis from XD. Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll try to have another adopt soon.

[~Indian pony~]

Thank you so much! I can definitely see the peacock coloring xD. Is there any chance I could get a transparent background with just the lioness (and the signature of course)? I like putting my adopts in my signature from time to time and it works better if they're transparent ^^.
I can't wait to see more Adoptables from you!

[WolvesOfFire]

Congratulations! I can also see the peacock lol

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I'll get to that as soon as I can get to a computer.