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Heart burn. by nolongeractive-

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Time spent 1 hour, 11 minutes
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Heart burn.

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:26 pm

Inspired by a Autopsy song by Otep. Great song. Great band.

I knowzzz, the anatomy isn't perfect but I didn't want it to be. I likes it dis way.

Open wide, look inside
At my autopsy

I feel like a woman
I feel like I care
I feel like I shouldn't
I feel like a child of despair
I feel like it's over
I feel like it's coming after me
I feel like it's closer
I feel like this is all I'll ever be
I feel like a failure
I feel like a hungry parasite
I feel like a razor
I feel like a prayer lost in flight
I feel like I'm hopeless
I'm afraid I'm a slave, I'm weak and average
I feel like a hammer
I feel like a nail
I feel like I'm guilty
I feel like the wrist that it impales
I feel like a butcher
I feel like I'm being deceived
I feel like a beautiful loser
I feel like all you sheep
Are laughing at me.

Open wide, look inside, at my autopsy
My autopsy

I feel like a complete waste of time
I feel I'm
Transparent
I feel like I can't
Escape my mind
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Re: Heart burn.

Postby Mr.Milo » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:33 pm

wow that heart looks soreal

i hate heartburns(the real one) it hurts!
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Re: Heart burn.

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:35 pm

It's really a crappy heart. I forgot a lot of the other valves and such.

I've never had a heartburn before, so I wouldn't know. Then again, I don't eat fast food that often.

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Re: Heart burn.

Postby Cute Without The E » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:48 pm

I like the nail in his head.:) hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehhehehehhe
I'm happier now.

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Re: Heart burn.

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:49 pm

Yeah, I thought it was a nice touch.

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Re: Heart burn.

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:52 pm

I have heartburn and I'm too young to have them. Had them ever since I was little. I hate them. Their painful and uncomfortable.
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Re: Heart burn.

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:56 pm

The title was a sorta pun about heartburn but there is a space there. Heart burn. two words, not one. It's not about the physical pain you get in your heart, but the mental pain. Hence the nail in the head.

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Re: Heart burn.

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:05 pm

TheEpicCrowbar wrote:The title was a sorta pun about heartburn but there is a space there. Heart burn. two words, not one. It's not about the physical pain you get in your heart, but the mental pain. Hence the nail in the head.


Oh lol Gomenasai. (Yikes I think I spelled that wrong..... )
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Re: Heart burn.

Postby nolongeractive- » Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:08 pm

You spelled it right. And you don't have to apologize, I was just pointing it out that people were missing the point of this drawing.

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Re: Heart burn.

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:26 pm

TheEpicCrowbar wrote:You spelled it right. And you don't have to apologize, I was just pointing it out that people were missing the point of this drawing.


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