i know we don't know each other
do you have food
i have been howling for days
no one will help
go away everyone says (afraid of me)
how about some bread
or maybe a bowl of water
i haven't been fed
i speak with my eyes
why is everyone so... afraid of me?
what the limit isn't for me is the skies (i want to live as long as i can)
i don't have a name
may i please have one
i am not insane (because i have no name)
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poem name: the wolf is crying, so she is speaking with her eyes by crying. she shows her emotion by crying, so you can see she is upset, and sad.
1st paragraph was about: well, the wolf came up to a random wolf asking for food, but the reason why is because the poor wolf was being rejected because of her black eyes. she was born with it, so everyone thing she is scary looking an bad.
2nd paragraph was about: the wolf was whining for food or shelter for days, but she gets rejected and tried getting attention so she goes up to some and asks for food and shelter but they push her away/walk away.
3rd paragraph was about: she want's bread or water, and hasn't been fed in a pretty long while. simple as pie.
4th paragraph was about: she speaks with her eyes by crying so it says "sad" or "upset" and she needs food because her goal is to, well, live for as long as an average wolf will live.
5th paragraph was about: she needs a name, and doesn't want to seem crazy for not being named.
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can i get some rates on this poem? if lower then 10 please reason. (1-10) any rate wont hurt my feelings, trust me!
(1) = not really that good.
(2) = well... i just don't like it.
(3) = i mean, its just, not really... erm.
(4) = its okay, but it isn't the very best!
(5) = i, personally, am not a fan.
(6) = it has its ups and downs
(7) = not bad!
(8) = Kewlio, great work!
(9) = couldn't be better!
(10) = awesome! i love it!__________________________________________________________________________________________________
this little guy needs a name (its a girl) can we get some names? reply down below what her name should be!
