it's not perfect but eh, what you gonna do.
aaaand for the tips:
The human body is super curvy. Like, almost no straight lines at all.
The eyes should be in the center of the head, so plan accordingly.
Clothing is not equal to skin. It shouldn't be that tight~
Legs need to actually be attached to the body. I would sketch the body then add clothes after. It'll make things connect better.
Also don't forget that legs have knees~
Clothes also have wrinkles which I didn't draw so well here but you get the point.
Hair is more unruly and has more points than what you did
there's probably more but I'm so tired I can't remember.
Yours was really good too, just keep practicing. I hope this helped ^-^



















