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Suggestions! by Skållra

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Suggestions!

Postby Skållra » Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:16 am

This is a practice of my new fursona. Please give advice on how to make her better! (She is a cat with my hair color, not a fox. And her name is Pearl.)
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Re: Suggestions!

Postby swampfiend » Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:52 am

Suggestions, though it's a very good work of art:
-Shorter and thicker neck.
-Smaller nose
-Thicker body
-Tail fluffy only at the end
Hope this helps!
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Re: Suggestions!

Postby Skållra » Thu Oct 16, 2014 10:18 am

Thank you!
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Re: Suggestions!

Postby gacha » Thu Oct 16, 2014 10:49 am

This is Very Good!
Better Then Me Atleast.
I Love That Shadowing.

Tips:

-Turn Smoothing up to 50-70 For Nice Smooth Lines,
Instead of Bumpy Ones.
-Shorter Neck, Unless That's Apart of The Design.
-Thicker Body. If you want her to be Skinny then you
Can Always Add Detail Like Rib Bones.
-Individuel Paws, Or Hooves Should be a Bit more Individuel.
-Smaller Nose

That's All, The Most Important One is the Smoothing one.
So Next Drawing I hope you Try it and Them all Out c:
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