This is Very Good!
Better Then Me Atleast.
I Love That Shadowing.
Tips:
-Turn Smoothing up to 50-70 For Nice Smooth Lines,
Instead of Bumpy Ones.
-Shorter Neck, Unless That's Apart of The Design.
-Thicker Body. If you want her to be Skinny then you
Can Always Add Detail Like Rib Bones.
-Individuel Paws, Or Hooves Should be a Bit more Individuel.
-Smaller Nose
That's All, The Most Important One is the Smoothing one.
So Next Drawing I hope you Try it and Them all Out c: