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Get it back by Patison

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Get it back

Postby Patison » Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:11 am

My first hand on CS lol xD

so, what do you think about it?
I would like crit and comments for this ^^

aaand I'll improve it later... so, at least I'll try
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Re: Get it back

Postby ~BalloonBlu~ » Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:22 am

AWSOME!
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Re: Get it back

Postby Obliviate » Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:26 am

OMG! :O That is totally awesome!!!! Really good!!! I like your "art-style" "drawing-style"? Whatever... I LOVE it! ^^
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Re: Get it back

Postby Patison » Sun Aug 22, 2010 3:24 am

Thanks, I'm glad you like it ^^
Sorry everyone, but I don't think I'll visit this site & draw.
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Re: Get it back

Postby Madame Raine » Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:04 am

There are only two things that really bother me about this picture;
You've drawn the thumb from sort of a side view. If you actually look at your hand, from this point of view you do not see the thumb from the side, but rather you see the whole nail from the "top." You're thumb can not turn sidewise unless it is pulled back. Likewise, most fingers can not bend at the top joint, without bending it at least a little bit on the second joint. Try it yourself, you'll see what I mean (unless you are weirdly jointed and thus capable of doing what most fingers can't). So next time you draw a picture like this, draw both joints bending. Don't be afraid to reference your hand, I do it all the time c:
You're fingers may be a little long as well, but other than that I like it. Hope this helps.
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Re: Get it back

Postby Patison » Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:52 am

thanks, I'll try to fix this ^^
Sorry everyone, but I don't think I'll visit this site & draw.
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Re: Get it back

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:26 am

It looks amazing!
Maybe next time make the hand a little less skinny. They sort of look like spider fingers.
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