[al-bo]

Adopted!

Name: Savage(claw)
Gender: Tom
Pelt: White
Eyes: Flame
Rank: Rogue(former Clan cat)
History:

Being the leader's wing man, Savage grew comfortable with the thought of being in charge. He grew attached to the temptation of power. As much as he respected his pack leader/best friend, he resented him all the same. His friend was all too passive and kind, Savage sought his friend wasn't assertive enough to truly befit his rank. Savage also questioned how he even earned this high title.

Savage tried his best to restrain his envious thoughts and suppressed them daily. But it became too much of an annoyance for him. He couldn't take it anymore! Savage gave no fair warning to his once true friend, attacking him where he stood, taken by surprise. However, Savage had heavily been mistaken as he had underestimated his former friend.

The pack leader was pack leader for a reason, and that reason was something Savage had found out the hard way... Savage persisted through the fight, though, in the back of his mind, he knew he had lost the fight.

His new foe had banned him from the clan from there on out, though Savage claimed he had left the clan long before, saying the clan was dragging him down.

[Dr. Acula]

Name: Savage(claw)
Gender: Tom
Pelt: White
Eyes: Flame
Rank: Rogue(former Clan cat)
History:

Being the leader's wing man, Savage grew comfortable with the thought of being in charge. He grew attached to the temptation of power. As much as he respected his pack leader/best friend, he resented him all the same. His friend was all too passive and kind, Savage sought his friend wasn't assertive enough to truly befit his rank. Savage also questioned how he even earned this high title.

Savage tried his best to restrain his envious thoughts and suppressed them daily. But it became too much of an annoyance for him. He couldn't take it anymore! Savage gave no fair warning to his once true friend, attacking him where he stood, taken by surprise. However, Savage had heavily been mistaken as he had underestimated his former friend.

The pack leader was pack leader for a reason, and that reason was something Savage had found out the hard way... Savage persisted through the fight, though, in the back of his mind, he knew he had lost the fight.

His new foe had banned him from the clan from there on out, though Savage claimed he had left the clan long before, saying the clan was dragging him down.

[al-bo]

Sure! He's all your's :3

[Breezeyheart]

Name:
Was once called Savage(claw), but he now goes by Lyall.
Name meaning:
Scottish surname transferred to unisex forename use, from the Old Norse personal name Liulfr, meaning "shield wolf."
Gender: Tom
Pelt: White
Eyes: Flame
Rank: Rogue(former Clan cat)
History:
Prologue:
It all began when, Lyall was a kit. His mother, and all the members of his clan, were looking forward to seeing what color, this young pure white tom's eyes were. They were sure that his eyes would blue. Then when he was two moons old, his eyes opened for the first time, and they were red as blood. A queen who was also nursing her kits, yowled in horror. Lyall looked at the queen in confusion, why was she yowling in horror? Was there something wrong with his eyes? Or was something else wrong?
Chapter one: page one
"Mom, why is she yowling in horror, is there something wrong my eyes?" Lyall innocently asked his mother. "No, sweetie." She rubbed up against him lovingly. "There is completely nothing wrong with your eyes, it's just that they are different, and uniquely colored." His mother, Rosewind said. But there was, and the medicine cat believed, that it was a sign of a bad things to come. The medicine cat convinced the leader, that Lyall's red eyes was a sign of him, maybe of him growing up to, be a killer in the near future. Because of that, Rosewind lost the ability to name him, whatever name that she wished to name him. Even though as she did wished to do so. She desperately wanted to named her only surviving kit, since she had lost the others to a bout of greencough. He was her pride and joy because of this, he was everything to her. And it broke her heart to not able to name him herself. The leader had took the one thing she had. Her ability to named her only kit, and she wasn't going let him get away with it that easily. She vowed to get her ability to name him back, no matter the cost.
Chapter one: page two
The next day, a naming ceremony happened that very morning. The leader stood over Lyall for what seemed like sky-lengths, above him on the high ledge. "Everyone please gather for the naming ceremony!" The leader yowled from the high ledge. And all of the clan started to gather around the high ledge. Lyall's mother, Rosewind sat down next to him, looking a little sad, that she couldn't have named her own kit. But yet at the same time, she looked like she was, going to burst at the seams with pride, that he was going to be named by the leader, himself. "I will name Rosewind's only surviving kit today." The leader paused. "I have picked a name for him, and I hope that Starclan approves my choice." The leader went silent as he quietly said, the name in his head. I have chosen Savagekit for his name. I hope that you approve my choice, Starclan. "From now on, your name will be Savagekit, young one." The leader said, looking down at Lyall. "Savagekit, Savagekit, Savagekit." The clan all said as one, chanting his new name until it rang in his ears.
Chapter one: page three
Savagekit, the name echoed in his mind. How could the leader do this to him? He wasn't savage at all. In fact it was a completely opposite of his nature. There wasn't a savage bone in Lyall's body. The name Savagekit reminded Lyall of everything that he isn't. It brought to mind of the stories his mom told him, about the savage rouges that lived in the forest, near by the clan. He was nothing like them! He vowed to not let his new name, hold him back from his true destiny. The one that the leader, and even the medicine cat couldn't see coming. The destiny that truly belonged to him. He could feel it calling him in his bones. Starclan knew that he wasn't destined to kill, he was truly destined to protect. He could feel it talking to him in the breeze, like a soft whispering in his ears. Starclan was telling him, that he was destined for great things. And no one could tell him otherwise. The sunset over the horizon, outside the nursery den. As Savagekit went to sleep, as he curled up to next his mother, in the nursery den. He just couldn't shake this feeling, that something bad was going to happen, something very bad.
Chapter one: page four
He closed his eyes, and he saw wildfire burning everywhere, it was in the camp clearing, in the dens, and it was blocking the ivy tunnel, which was the only way out of the clan camp. And worst of it all, it felt like his fur was on fire.

Chapter two: page one
WIP, something to do with him becoming a warrior, and earning his warrior name: Savageclaw.

[al-bo]

@Breezyheart I'm so sorry, but I already gave him away ): (And you had such a wonderful history!) I've been making another rogue soon, so perhaps you'll want him instead? Once again, I'm terribly sorry ):

[Breezeyheart]

@al-bo: I just had a spark of an great history for this guy, but it took me an hour so to write that when I was writing the history. So before I could post it, you had already given to Dr. Acula. (which by the way, is alright with me.) But I posted it anyway, cause I didn't want to have lost the wonderful history that I was writing.

So, but of course, I'm interested in seeing, what your other rouge looks like. qvq. I'm very curious as to what his colors will be, if he'll have an accessory on his tail like his guy, or if he'll have something completely different.

So you are completely fine, I'm not mad at all. I'm actually very curious of this other rouge. He sounds wonderful. Besides Dr. Acula did a great history too. So, he deserves him just as much I do. I'm sure he'll take of good care of Savage. Beside there's no hard feelings here, none at all. In fact you can have a hug, you look like you need one. *hugs* :3

[al-bo]

Aw :3 I'm so glad you aren't upset. As for the other rogue, I may start working on him soon, but having school, its a little difficult. As soon as he's done, I'll let you know :3

[Breezeyheart]

Aw :3 I'm so glad that you are glad. I can't wait to see him! I'm so excited, but I understand school makes it hard to work on him right away. I'm home-schooled so it's as not as bad, since I don't have to get up at 7:00 AM in the morning, to do schoolwork. I can do it whenever time that I want to. So, go ahead and take your time. I can wait, honest. I'm a very patient person. Besides he gives something awesome look forward to. :3

[al-bo]

Ok, I have on up, but I will continue to make more throughout the weeks :3 and actually, I'm homeschooled as well, I just have a sorta "class thing" Its a little hard to explain, but basically, we get our work for the week on Tuesday, and have to have it all completed in a week the following Tuesday, even though I also have a science lab, math, Latin, and literature on different days, as well as other lessons and such, so I am pretty busy X3

[Breezeyheart]

OMG! He is so gorgeous and handsome! I'm love ♥.. Thank you so much for reserving him for me! *glomps*
That's basically that same thing that I do with my homeschool! So I'm pretty busy too. And on top of all my homeschool work, I have daily chores that I must do everyday! I have to clean the four litter-boxes that are in the bedrooms (which two are in my bedroom, and two are in my parents bedroom.) I have to feed and water the 8 cats that we have: three times a day. I have to feed my beta fish: Dart, twice daily. And I have to feed and water the two chickens, that we have out in a fenced chicken run and coop: Three times daily as well, or they won't stop clucking as loud as they can. I have to water the flowers in the front yard, and the garden in the backyard. And I have to get the mail daily, not including Saturday and Sunday. So, I have a lot of chores, but when I am done I am allowed to get on the computer. :3