Please I need some pointers for drawing hoomans
Yes I know her neck is long but I like long necks hhhhh
Yes I know her neck is long but I like long necks hhhhh
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critique please by yikes
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Re: critique please
by Zoker » Sun Aug 17, 2014 4:54 am
Its an excellent drawing, but I think his collarbone is a bit too pinty and sticking out..its should be a little curvey. Also, the neck has broadened at the end...its usually one smooth curve...see what I mean --->https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRzglBgz8kCPVpmCfp13aiTMuev7T9S8A-BcKFAYbLCCc-IRqBepQ
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Re: critique please
by emiiyon » Sun Aug 17, 2014 7:22 am
woahhh bro, i'm really in love with this character! you did quite a swell job on thisss!
i'm no professional, but there are a few things i see that could use a wee bit of tweeking, but overall, i think you did a fantastic job!
first thing, the neck is connected very far back to the jaw. if you were going for something a tad more realistic in proportions, i would attach the neck a little closer to the 'point' of the chin. second, the back of the head is a little small. think about the largeness of the brain and the skull that has to fit inside. i also think this might actually be correct, but the positioning of the neck is throwing off the size of the head because of its placement further back. when one thing is out of wack, sometimes it cannn throw off the whole image hehe. the length of the neck isn't really a problem so long as you can balance it with the rest of the image.
really those are the only two issues i see. the chest should jut out a little more from the collar bone, but besides that, i'm impressed by this drawing! the facial structure is good and the colors are wonderful!
i hope to see more human work from you in the future!
i'm no professional, but there are a few things i see that could use a wee bit of tweeking, but overall, i think you did a fantastic job!
first thing, the neck is connected very far back to the jaw. if you were going for something a tad more realistic in proportions, i would attach the neck a little closer to the 'point' of the chin. second, the back of the head is a little small. think about the largeness of the brain and the skull that has to fit inside. i also think this might actually be correct, but the positioning of the neck is throwing off the size of the head because of its placement further back. when one thing is out of wack, sometimes it cannn throw off the whole image hehe. the length of the neck isn't really a problem so long as you can balance it with the rest of the image.
really those are the only two issues i see. the chest should jut out a little more from the collar bone, but besides that, i'm impressed by this drawing! the facial structure is good and the colors are wonderful!
i hope to see more human work from you in the future!
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Re: critique please
by yikes » Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:46 am
Thank you very much. I am not the best at realism and I appreciate the feedback.
I have noticed that she is very thin and her neck and forehead are out of proportion. Thank you very much though, all of you uvu
Just so you know. My tablet is broken atm and this was drawn with a mouse ;u;
I have noticed that she is very thin and her neck and forehead are out of proportion. Thank you very much though, all of you uvu
Just so you know. My tablet is broken atm and this was drawn with a mouse ;u;
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Re: critique please
by username by me » Tue Aug 19, 2014 1:16 pm
I like long necks too! 
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by Canis2954 » Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:32 am
- *smacks "will critique soon" sign into ground and scrambles away*
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OK SOOOO
maybe raise the hairline?? hmmm... the color palette's great! i like the freckles too. maybe shade/lighten and smooth the tool just a bit more next time! i do love it though! :D
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