[flight;;]

I keep staring at this, knowing that the anatomy is off somehow, but I'm unable to spot what exactly is off.
I am asking for help, criticism, and critique. Thank you so much for anyone who posts/attempts to help me. I'd really appreciate it.
This is the second time I have posted a redline, but the first did not get any responses.

Please help me fix my mistakes, thank you! <3

Post and I will add you. c:

[Tynahi]

I'll redline if you'd like flight;;

[flight;;]

I'll redline if you'd like flight;;

Thank you so much!!!
I really appreciate it <3

[flight;;]

bump c:

[Tynahi]

Redlined c: