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make a w i s h... by Snowseph

Artist Snowseph [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 21 minutes
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make a w i s h...

Postby Snowseph » Sun Jul 27, 2014 2:35 pm

I can't stop procrastinating ahaha. To anyone I owe art to, I will get it down after this competition. :>

Ahhh so this is another piece for my try-out of JBD NB 293! I was going to do her accessories, but I don't have time. ;v; Timer is correct! My use only! c:

As always, crit and comments are always welcome!

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Postby santinel » Mon Jul 28, 2014 12:37 pm

This is super-cute! As for critism all I can pick on would be the composition. This is nitpicking, but when a character is facing left it's often better to place them farther to the right so that they have space to gaze into, sort of? Use the rule of thirds c:
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Postby Snowseph » Mon Jul 28, 2014 12:39 pm

Ahh thank you! c: I will definitely take your criticism and I will do my best to apply it. c: Thanks again!

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