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Mudclaw's Story Part One

Postby CookiesCooking » Sat Jul 26, 2014 9:28 am

Mudclaw was crying in the corner of the camp, her body ragged and torn. "O-oh.....Scourge....dad...Why did you have to leave me to run BloodClan?..."
She whipped around and saw you approaching. Mudclaw blinks and puts on a fake smile. "I'm Fine, Can't you see the Smile?" She turns and goes into her den, sobbing. The collar that Scourge was wearing was now on the she-cat's neck, bloody and has more fangs and claws. She sits down in the back of the cave and starts to claw the stone, its sound echoing through the camp. She seemed deaf to the noise, her eyes streaming once more.

"How my life pains me as time streaches long.......how could I have led this clan?....so rest father now, my punishments arrived....in exile I watch your eyes sleep....."

((Play this while reading, adds more feeling. :) ))



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"π’ͺ𝓃𝑒 𝓀𝒾𝓃𝒹 π“Œπ‘œπ“‡π’Ή 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒸𝒽𝒢𝓃𝑔𝑒 π“ˆπ‘œπ“‚π‘’π‘œπ“ƒπ‘’'π“ˆ π’Ήπ’Άπ“Ž."

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Re: I'm Fine... ((Color In))

Postby CookiesCooking » Sat Jul 26, 2014 9:51 am

Hey, Guys? Give me some feedback, also If I should continue the story through Oekaki. :D
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"π’ͺ𝓃𝑒 𝓀𝒾𝓃𝒹 π“Œπ‘œπ“‡π’Ή 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒸𝒽𝒢𝓃𝑔𝑒 π“ˆπ‘œπ“‚π‘’π‘œπ“ƒπ‘’'π“ˆ π’Ήπ’Άπ“Ž."

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Re: I'm Fine... ((Color In))

Postby Shippo Kitsune » Mon Jul 28, 2014 7:03 pm

The words brown cat, and can't don't need capitalization. Other then that I love it so far. <3
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Re: Mudclaw's Story Part One

Postby CookiesCooking » Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:08 pm

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"π’ͺ𝓃𝑒 𝓀𝒾𝓃𝒹 π“Œπ‘œπ“‡π’Ή 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒸𝒽𝒢𝓃𝑔𝑒 π“ˆπ‘œπ“‚π‘’π‘œπ“ƒπ‘’'π“ˆ π’Ήπ’Άπ“Ž."

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