if you want some critiquing...i think you could have done better on the coloring... though i REALLY like the idea of it! good job! hope you dont take this in a bad way
HAD I the heavens' embroidered cloths, Enwrought with golden and silver light, The blue and the dim and the dark cloths Of night and light and the half-light, I would spread the cloths under your feet But I, being poor, have only my dreams; I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly, because you tread on my dreams. ~William Butler Yeats~