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Feedback?

Postby corrosive_limes » Thu Feb 13, 2014 3:34 am

If this were a species, would you adopt it, and how can I improve them?

Decided so far:

keeping this tail design.
Fire orb/essence/companion/elemental.
Glowing scales.
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Re: Feedback?

Postby ~*~ Dashy ~*~ » Thu Feb 13, 2014 4:35 am

I would adopt a lamp tail!!

As for improvements, it's already a pretty looking species ... Maybe remove the horns and instead of the bell shaped lamp mak it a ball ended tail that glows ... or offer that as a unique feature!!
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Re: Feedback?

Postby corrosive_limes » Thu Feb 13, 2014 12:09 pm

I'll keep the horns for now, but maybe change them to a mutation. And I got the idea because I was messing with a small lamp. And they are called Lamp Tail Dragons, so that would entirely defeat their purpose.
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Re: Feedback?

Postby ~*~ Dashy ~*~ » Fri Feb 14, 2014 8:31 am

Yeah, I guess you're right :3 Glad to offer my help! If you do turn them into a true species, I would probably adopt one or maybe try out for artist :) The species has great potential, so hope all goes well!
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Re: Feedback?

Postby corrosive_limes » Fri Feb 14, 2014 1:19 pm

Updated them. How this?
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Re: Feedback?

Postby Ax Animorphs » Sat Feb 15, 2014 2:45 am

Yes I would totally adopt these they look amazing <3
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Re: Feedback?

Postby corrosive_limes » Sat Feb 15, 2014 2:57 am

Any suggestions though? For the tail, ideas in general, etc.
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Re: Feedback?

Postby Ax Animorphs » Sat Feb 15, 2014 2:59 am

Maybe make the tail a little thicker and kind of have the lamp hanging from it? Idk. :D
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Re: Feedback?

Postby Greenfriedenvy » Sat Feb 15, 2014 3:24 am

I agree that the tail definately needs to be thicker, probably the neck too, a little.
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Re: Feedback?

Postby corrosive_limes » Sat Feb 15, 2014 3:32 am

The tail WILL be thicker obviously. The light red is the base line sketch, dark red is the more thorough sketch. I haven't started on the tail yet. I was thinking maybe thicker legs? And do you think they should have a fire orb/essence/companion/element?
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