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Fail. by -Audio.Hound-

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Fail.

Postby -Audio.Hound- » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:33 am

I'm not liking how this came out.
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Re: Fail.

Postby animals00 » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:39 am

the neck is a bit strange but I love the wings ♥ and the head is also great!it's just the body bit but I couldn't draw that anyway, I wnat to see what you like how it comes out!
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Re: Fail.

Postby -Audio.Hound- » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:53 am

I was going for a scruffy look on the neck, and I agree on the body. But, now that I look at it, the wings are nice. Thanks!
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Re: Fail.

Postby BlueCynder » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:57 am

I think this is great. I like style.
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She greets the dancing dusk,

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Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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Re: Fail.

Postby MC mango » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:58 am

The neck is a smidge too long, but don't get me wrong,
This is so freaking amazing! ;D
Your a really good artist; your style is very unique.
This is not a fail. D8<
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Re: Fail.

Postby ↫mars↬ » Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:02 pm

This is one of your better ones! I love the neack acually, the reasion for this is that it makes it looke more "realistic." Keep up the good work!

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Re: Fail.

Postby -Audio.Hound- » Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:59 pm

@Camster: Thanks!
@Mix: Later! I need sleep. Cx
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Re: Fail.

Postby 12friends » Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:55 pm

Okay if you want this to be the best ever I have a tad bit of advice for you. The neck is a little weird maybe to long. The muzzle part of it needs to be a little less long and pointy. If you make these changes I would love to see how it turns out so you can become intermidiate. :thumbup:
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Re: Fail.

Postby ↫mars↬ » Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:44 am

I think th emuzzle is the best part, well becides the wings, i fail at wings. The reasion for that is, it makes it look mor hybrid-ish. like a wolf and bird mix.

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Re: Fail.

Postby -Audio.Hound- » Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:13 am

@12freinds: I purposly made the neck look scruffy, but I do think it looks a little bit long. Thanks!
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