[ksk814]

trying out an eye
comments and crit!

[iiktome]

you did very well! i would just have to critique the coloring and placement of the pupil. try bringing the pupil up a bit and shade the rest of the way up the same color. it gives depth and it look rather clean and professional. also, the color of the outer area of the eye (the black/grey part), try making the color the same as the lines so it looks much more like realism and so that it doesn't look so much as your trying to make the lines real noticeable. otherwise, you did excellent with the lighting and shading of the eye! great job. c: