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Water Haiku by Tea_Leaf

Artist Tea_Leaf [gallery]
Time spent 43 minutes
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Water Haiku

Postby Tea_Leaf » Sat Dec 14, 2013 4:45 pm

This is a haiku that I'm doing for a school project. :3

But the stars are terrible... *sighs*
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I'll wither,
So peel away the bark.
'Cause nothing
Grows when it is dark.

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Whoa-oh-oh oh
Cover your crystal eyes
And feel the tones
that tremble down your spine.

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Re: Water Haiku

Postby bunni. » Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:17 am

Everything looks very nice! You're haiku is so good, mine still followed the syllables but is ugh... Good thing she didn't take points off of that. :3 And the stars are good!! How is it bad?
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