[Mavric]

I just wanted to post this to see if you like it, I need to color in and cleanup the lines, but this is what I have so far, I would love some critique if possible ^^

I think it is done for now, I would love some more criticism, thank you ^^

[Gratefultritone]

This looks great so far. o:

[Resin]

I'm enjoying it so far. Reminds me a bit of Ludo from Labyrinth and that's a huge bonus. (: My only critique is that I'd like to see eyes and a more neutral expression rather than perky. I can't wait to see the finished product, Mavric.

[Mavric]

Ok, thank you ^^ I may not be able to cut the mane back to see the eyes on the main body, but I may be able to fit on the eyes as an extra away from the body, but I will try, thank you again
~Mavi

[Resin]

Not a problem. Thank you. You're the one doing all the hard work here.
Eyes as an extra portion on the side will do just fine. (:

[Mavric]

Ok awesome! thank you ^^ I will work on it some more soon ^^

[Resin]

Lookin' cute.

The outline isn't as crisp as I'd like it to be. I'd also like to see claws on the back paws as well. It looks a little off without them.