[username by me]

so here it is, as you can see its still a work in progress, I still need to add shading and fix the lines and, and add the child lines and such. N i g h t s t a r, I have added you so you can look at the layers and tell me what needs fixing. (like the female lines, I know there off, but I don't know how to draw them the correct way.) I would also like to know what kind of shading you want, like realistic shading, or like simple shading, it would be great if you had an example. One more thing, what pose do you want me to raw the baby in?

[eleutheromania]

I can't look at the layers right now, on my iphone. But what you have looks fine but it looks a bit stiff. The hooves are a little too rounded also and the tail could be a little less of a straight line.
I want realistic shading if possibly.
Pup lines. I'd like them also standing.

[username by me]

thank you so much

[username by me]

I re-did the tail, but i'm not sure if its good, tell me if you want me to re do it again. I also fixed the hooves, tell me if their too square, and I will fix them again I also edited the lines to look a bit more relaxed. please look at the female lines when you get time, thanks

[eleutheromania]

Looks pretty good ^^

[username by me]

what about the female lines?

[eleutheromania]

I looked at them too, they seem to be fine.

[username by me]

okay, thanks, I'll do the shading and the pup lines