[bananer]

Here you have a happy German Shepherd named Crocket. He is in my imagination and does not exist, but anyway, here he is hunting a rooster in a wonderful garden named Oakshaft garden. It's a beautiful place with hens, horses, dogs, cats, cows and horses.

I would love getting some critic for the Background of this one, if it looks allright or not. ^.^

[PeanutGradsko]

Looks good so far, and I'd love to see it finished!

[bananer]

Thanks! And btw, It's done now! ^.^

[Cikada]

Aaaaw! Reminds me of the old Pettson and Findus theme! Adorable! Needs a feature!

[bananer]

Aaaw, thankyou!! <3 <3 <3

And BTW, if you're wondering what thoose strange orange sticks are, they're like reflexes to show where the road is when either it's snowing or just dark since they're no road lights there. We have such at home ^.^

And btw, I love the picture in your signature Cikada! Such meningful picture! <3

[PeanutGradsko]

I think the background looks good!

[MegaCherrio]

ohmygod this is so cute and funny! everything looks wonderful to me, keep drawing! you have such a cute style

[bananer]

Thankyou guys! You make me so happy!! :u:

[Toastberg]

Here come some crits C:
Perhaps the most noticeable thing is that the background, particularly the red barns, stand out more than the subject of the drawing in the foreground. You could change this by positioning the dog and chicken more towards the centre of the picture, by making them brighter and the background darker or maybe by adding some highlights or something to the dog and chook. Or you can do it with nebulous fuzzy areas of light. (I'm not really doing a good job of explaining this, am I? Too many methods!) However, the bright colours you've used do make the picture stand out as a whole from others around it, which is good. It's clear you've gone for a cartoony style with this, hence the solid black lines, but for the barns' detail (i.e. the dark lines on the red) maybe a lighter colour would have been better? Methinks they stand out a little too much. Overall - the background is great but its relationship to the foreground could be improved.
Hope that helps, and nice job

[bananer]

Thankyou! If its one thing I need, its critism! Thanks, it helped alot!