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Redlined by Tramone

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Redlined

Postby Tramone » Mon Nov 18, 2013 8:57 am

I have sloppy handwriting, so I'll just type everything. ^^;

1) The ears are positioned differently, otherwise you did great!
2)The fur is not so spiky, it has more of a flow to it.
3) The snout is shorter.
4) The back has a flow, like #2.
5) There should be a separated line between the head and the neck, and it is often fluffy.
6) For my style, I give the smiles a little curved shape at the end. The snout is like that of a dog, so you should include a canine-like line around the nuzzle.
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Re: Redlined

Postby labradude » Mon Nov 18, 2013 9:08 am

Ah, this helps a lot! Yet again, thank you so very much! ;v;
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Re: Redlined

Postby Tramone » Mon Nov 18, 2013 9:56 am

I'm so happy it helped! eue I hope everyone's styles help you to make the almighty style! *waves arms around* ;o;
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