[Immortalkitten]

I did horrible on this. This is a terrible picture to me.
I made your lines lighter. Hope you don't mind.

The head on the left is a tom/kitten's.

This is how I was trying to draw it. You can look through my gallery for more if you want.

My tips and advice:
Longer feet.
Straighter back.
Ears more rounded.
Pupils and eye color.
Slanted eyes.

But... shading. I don't so much of that.

[Miyazaki]

Thanks so much! I love your style!

[Immortalkitten]

You're welcome!