I'm a mouse artist, so here's what I would have written:
The tail is connected to the spine; it's not separate.
The leg doesn't go back that far.
Four legs.
No shoulder blade.
The muzzle/snout isn't that long.
The eyes should be more slanted.
The chest goes up, not out.
The belly should be shorter.
The back leg doesn't have as much of an indention, and they aren't as sharp.
The snout doesn't go all the way up the face.
The tail is connected to the spine; it's not separate.
The leg doesn't go back that far.
Four legs.
No shoulder blade.
The muzzle/snout isn't that long.
The eyes should be more slanted.
The chest goes up, not out.
The belly should be shorter.
The back leg doesn't have as much of an indention, and they aren't as sharp.
The snout doesn't go all the way up the face.
