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Summer Morning by frostt.

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Summer Morning

Postby frostt. » Fri Oct 18, 2013 8:07 am

Just tryout art.

I would love some comments on this, my first piece actually trying to use light effects. :D

Edit: Fixed the body, moved the leg, still not too happy with the ear but I think it looks better.
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby Bored.com » Fri Oct 18, 2013 8:14 am

I love this; but there are some things I would like to say......The ear is too small...Just saying. It kind of looks like it's a de-formation of the head. Try and make it bigger, and more of a 3-D triangle shape, in a way I can tell you about if you just PM me.

I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just pointing that out for next time!! ^^
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby ~Tornado~ » Fri Oct 18, 2013 8:38 am

this is beautiful <3
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby frostt. » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:10 am

Thank you so much for the tip! I couldn't get that silly ear right :lol: So I just left it like that, again thank you.
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby Paper.dragonflies » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:14 am

wow! very pretty!
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby Bored.com » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:15 am

You're so welcome.
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby Bored.com » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:16 am

Also; since you made the neck so thick, don't put the leg so far up, and make the body bigger..It makes it look top heavy, the way you did your proportions. I'm just suggesting new tips! Try and make the body look....Even.
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby frostt. » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:53 am

Ok I tried fixing those things, does it look better now? I'm so happy with this advice, I'm really trying to improve my drawing and this helps so much.
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby Bored.com » Fri Oct 18, 2013 12:07 pm

Yes! That improved so much! Try and make the meeting between the neck and the body a little rounded! That's all the real advice you need! And smooth out the lines more! That's all! ^^ You're golden.
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Re: Summer Morning

Postby frostt. » Fri Oct 18, 2013 12:14 pm

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! This has helped me so much, I can't even express how happy I am! :D :D :D
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