[All Might]

*Deep out in the forest a legend was soon to be born. The WhiteFang Pack was soon needing a new leader. The only direct decendant of the Alpha was a beautiful off-white wolf by the name of Jewel. She was deeply wanted by all the packs lower males and the ones closer to her own rank....she was a link in a very special lineage*
Jewel decided to go for a walk through the Short Tree forest. As she walked her tail swayed back and forth,she looked around and found nothing of interest. Though Jewel did not know something, back at her packs main area her father,Alpha Fast Claws was debating on who would be her suiter.
He knew that all the other males in the pack would love to be mates with his beautiful daughter,this made him very proud. Though he knew he must find the strongest the fastest the smartest male to be her suiter. He decided he would have his two best males fight for her. The loser would be banished. He chose Shadow and SilverCoat. Fast claws decided against his recent thought that he would choose the two strongest instead he chose the strongest in his eyes,the mean ruthful and hateful Shadow. The other one he chose SilverCoat, was in Fast Claw's eye's the weakest and least worthy. He figured it would not be much trouble for him to leave,or for him to just be killed.
Its was now almost night,the time when Shadow and SilverCoat would battle. They prepared to fight each other Shadow was growling and pawing the ground waiting to start the fight so he could beat the "runt" SilverCoat and claim his prize. Who would soon be returning from her day out,refreashed and in his eyes ready to mate.
Fast Claws now howlind,which meant the fight was to begin very soon. This made Shadow jump up and ready his stance. SilverCoat simply whimpered and stood up trying to mimick shadows stance. He was scared but hopeful, he like all the others loved Jewel.
"Its time."Barked Fast Claws,as he fishihed saying time Jewel came walking through she tilted her head.
"Whats going on?"She asked in a muffled whimper. Her mother sitting near her told her that Shadow and SilverCoat were going to fight for her. This appaled Jewel, she could not watch it, for she knew that Shadow would win and SilverCoat her secret love would die or be banished. She than turned around as she heard the first growl.
Shadow pounced at SilverCoat and bit into his back. SilverCoat repayed the attack with a deep scratch in the side of Shadows Face. He started bleeding than bit into SilverCoats paw. SilverCoat whined in pain and fear. He knew he could not give up. At his whimper Jewel ran away to her sercret place to wait out the fight and hope the one she really loved would make it out alive.....

To be continued if you think I should.....The pics already drawn so you'd jsut have to wait for me to type the story....PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT ON WHAT YOU THINK OF IT AND IF YOU CAN HELP ME COME UP WITH A NAME FOR THE SERIES I'L PUT YOUR CHARECTER IN IT EVEN IF YOU MAKE IT UP RIGHT THEIR JSUT FOR THE STORY

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[All Might]

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Please I'm begging of you read the story its pretty good and nicly punctuated.. leave a comment maybe like it tell me what you think should come next tell me if you would like to help me come up with the rest of the story and help me come up with a better title best one gets a charecter of theirs withen certain drawing capabilities in the story

[Black Rhino]

AWESOME!xD.I wanna make a story now,maybe later though.

[Black Rhino]

I command you to hurry up and type!!xDDDD :]

[All Might]

AWESOME!xD.I wanna make a story now,maybe later though.

Thankies:) Ooh when you do i'll check it out and comment on every one

[All Might]

I command you to hurry up and type!!xDDDD :]

LOL wellza the next one is up and that part of the story is typed its just a bit shorter because its left off at a perfect part for the next pic which wil be super long again lolz

[Black Rhino]

YAY!*Runs off to go see it.But trips,then gets back up and sits on a seat,looking at the screen*

[All Might]

YAY!*Runs off to go see it.But trips,then gets back up and sits on a seat,looking at the screen*

lol

[Bitter Broken Me]

OMG THAT IS SO GOOD!!!!!

[All Might]

OMG THAT IS SO GOOD!!!!!

thankies:)