[Rated R]

Hello, I'm Rated R, a new artist. I won first place in the artist competition, and I apologize for not making an adopt sooner.
I usually type without capitalization, but since this is my first adopt here, I felt it necessary to sound /somewhat/ professional and what not. I'm looking forward to join the community (as soon as I pick which design I made for the competition I'm going to keep...), and I really hope you like this Koshei.
Now, onto the dragon:

This here is a green-orbed Koshei, based off of this color palette. This isn't FCFS, so I'm looking for good forms. Prettying up will help you, and it doesn't have to be amazing prettying up, if you don't know how to- I just want to see some effort.

The form is below, and extras are allowed (and will increase the likeness of your form):

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Username:
Name:
Gender:
Orb Color: Green
What does he/she use his/her orb for:
What attracted you to this Koshei:


As of right now, end date is undecided to see whether people will try for this Koshei.

NAME: Serene
OWNED BY: Amyee498

[~The Original Alice~]

Username: I am ~The Original Alice~ Nice to meet you ^-^
Name: His name is Kaito
Gender: Male
Orb Color: Green
What does he/she use his/her orb for: to warn help the larger animals such as dolphins and whales to prevent them from getting too close to shores and getting beached.
What attracted you to this Koshei: His soft yet demanding color and attitude
Other: Domo (Male Manatee, top), Juile (A Female Pink Sea-Through Fantasia, middle), and Joe (Male Axolotl, bottom)

They are the three creatures he cares most about, so in other words their his best friends.

[eugenides]

☆Serene☆

Username
My name is Amyee498 but you can call me Amy, Amyee or anything you happen to think of. Aims is ok too...

Koshei's Name
This Koshei will be named Serene for her calm colors. It sounds fitting as well.

Gender
Serene will be offended if someone didn't know she was a female!

Age
Serene is 2 years old. In human years, this means she is in her late teens. Serene would like to be this age forever, but *sigh*, they don't make anti-aging formulas for Koshei Dragons no matter what they do. Believe me, Serene has done some pretty outrageous things before. Don't make me tell you because you do NOT want to know.

Orb Color
Serene's orb color is green, for growing sea life and plant life.

What Does She Use Her Orb For?
She is normally seen helping repair the coral reefs that have taken much damage in the recent years, caused by pollution. Serene can't bear the thought that the beautiful coral could be destroyed and she didn't even try to help. She also likes to help humans out by growing seaweed and other edible sea grasses. When she is on dry land, she grows endangered plants and herbs.


This is a snapshot of her favorite reef, as she had spent a lot of time helping it flourish after being bleached by pollution. I swear she cares about it more than she does me!

What Attracted You to this Koshei?
I was attracted to her with her cool and calm colors, her gentleness, and her devotion to save the oceans from destruction.

Other
Congrats on winning the artist comp and making your first adoptable! Good luck!:)

[Rated R]

--tiny bump--

[eugenides]

When is the end date?

[Rated R]

-- I shall set the end date to tomorrow; August 9th. Last minute edits must be done before midnight today EST--

[eugenides]

Ok. *trots off to edit form*.

[~The Original Alice~]

Ok. *trots off to edit form*.

lol xD that's exactly what I was thinking when I edited mine :)

[Rated R]

Alright, so first I'd like to thank you two for finding interest in this Koshei, it being my first adoptable given ever.
Anyways, I judged this mainly on word/quality content, and which personality I find for fitting, so the owner of this Koshei dragon is ...
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Amyee498!
Congratulations on Serene; the personality you gave her was what I would have seen her with!
I trust that you will keep her active!

And ~The Original Alice~, this doesn't mean I didn't like your form- I liked what you had begun to put on it- your idea was fantastic; this being my first adopt here, I want to give you some advice that may help you win Koshei in the future:
You have great ideas, just further explain them. Elaborate on them. You're bound to win a koshei in the near future- I can see it.

Anyways, thanks for even posting forms, I really appreciate it.

[eugenides]

I can't believe it... Thanks so much!