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Redlined~ by fakeviolinz

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Redlined~

Postby fakeviolinz » Sat Jun 22, 2013 4:06 pm

{ This is my BEST. WOLF. Ever. Seriously. }

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I redlined it for you. xD

Like I said.. It's going to be realistic.

The big things I noticed in your drawing; the muzzle is WAY too short and the body is very out of proportion.

Tips;
Use a reference for each drawing you make! This can help with pose and characteristics.

Critique;

First of all, wolf ears are tall and erect. You drew them much too short and without any detail.
The ears also have a bit of fluff in them, so make sure you don't forget it!
When ending the ears, there is a bit of fluff at the end then it spreads onto the neck.
The forehead is also much more soft and longer, but if you want to draw a mane that is fine.
The muzzle itself is perfectly long, but not /too/ long. The nose is not that large in most wolves,
but it all depends on style and breed of wolf. Also, all wolves have cheek fur. Try drawing that.
You can draw whisker pads as well but it's not necessary if you're not drawing in a realistic style.
The tail does not curl. As much as I wanted to draw the tail I simply could not fit it.
It trails behind them. Another thing; the head looks too large for its body. Try
keeping everything in its needed proportion. The forehead is also a little out of proportion.
Your bodies need to be wider too. They are not that thin, no matter what you try.
Also, practice your shoulders; they don't act in that position.

I'm very bad at explaining. If you use a reference, you could fix all of the anatomy problems.
Oi. Hope you like it x'D I tried my best.
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Re: Redlined~

Postby Zatch Bell » Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:12 am

Your style is a little bit realistic, i like that but i think my wolves will never be as good as yours ^^ i will try with my cartoony stryle but i really, really appreciate the critique
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Re: Redlined~

Postby fakeviolinz » Sun Jun 23, 2013 10:18 am

Blue Eyed Wolf wrote:Your style is a little bit realistic, i like that but i think my wolves will never be as good as yours ^^ i will try with my cartoony stryle but i really, really appreciate the critique



Thanks. ;v;
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