[o'kami]

Okay so here's my redline with little notes and stuffs 8D
Your style seemed kind of cartoon-y so I tried to use a cartoon style ,as well.
ears- try and make them a little more erect and pointy.
eyes- your eyes are fine, if that's your cartoon-y style.
eyebrows- I like adding them, because it adds more expression. (It's really
optional, though)
snout/nose- the snout should be a little bit longer and less round, and the nose bigger.
fluff- I like putting fluffy fur on the face, tail, elbows, neck, and ears. -The neck fur
should be sticking out this way and that, instead of smooth and almost weasel-ish o-o
shoulder- a little more sloped
body- the body should be a little bit longer, compared to the head.
Alright, well that's it ovo

[Zatch Bell]

I really like your style OuO

[o'kami]

Thanks eue