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Why must I be Me? by breath.

Artist breath. [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 2 minutes
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Why must I be Me?

Postby breath. » Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:06 pm

I drew this while listening to this song

Jar of Hearts By Christina Perri

No I can't take one more step towards you
Cause all that's waiting is regret
Don't you know I'm not your ghost anymore
You lost the love I loved the most

I learned to live half alive
And now you want me one more time...

And who do you think you are
Running around leaving scars
Collecting your jar of hearts
And tearing love apart,
You're gonna catch a cold
From the ice inside your soul
So don't come back for me.
Who do you think you are?

I hear you're asking all around
If I am anywhere to be found
But I have grown too strong
To ever fall back in your arms

And I've learned to live half alive
And now you want me one more time

And who do you think you are
Running around leaving scars
Collecting your jar of hearts,
And tearing love apart
You're gonna catch a cold
From the ice inside your soul
Don't come back for me
Who do you think you are?

It took so long just to feel alright
Remember how to put back the light in my eyes
I wish I had missed the first time that we kissed
Cause you broke all your promises
And now you're back
You don't get to get me back

And who do you think you are
Running around leaving scars
Collecting your jar of heart
And tearing love apart
You're gonna catch a cold
From the ice inside your soul
So don't come back for me
Don't come back at all!

And who do you think you are
Running around leaving scars
Collecting your jar of hearts
And tearing love apart
You're gonna catch a cold
From the ice inside your soul
Don't come back for me
Don't come back at all
Who do you think you are?
Who do you think you are?
Who do you think you are?


If there's to much blood, Mods please PM me and I can edit it.

This is also vent art. Everyone at my school teases me Hence the title. Sorry if this isn't Intermediate. I went away and practiced then thought I should try again.

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Re: Why must I be Me?

Postby Pinkpaw » Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:37 pm

WOW ThIz doed deserve an intermediate wow im stunned!!
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I'm Pinkpaw but you can call me Pink, from my username you may all think I like girlie stuff and whatever but I DONT!!!
only the colour pink though. My favourite anime series is Naruto and my favourite character is Gaara (because he is cool) its nice meeting you :P
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Re: Why must I be Me?

Postby KikiPond » Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:00 pm

This is pretty good!
As for critique, though, I think the eye should be down more and the lips should be a bit more full, the chin needs to be pushed out a bit too. Even though I like it, I don't think it should be in intermediate.
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Re: Why must I be Me?

Postby breath. » Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:19 pm

ok, thanks! i will edit
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