[ghftz.]

So, yeah.. redlines. Redlines would be awesome.
Figured it might help more if I actually made an attempt to draw something beyond a sketch, so, yeah, tweakage. Tried adding facial features, whatever the hoof/leg separation is called(I fail at terminology, I'm sorry Dx), I'm probably not going to try with the mane/tail until I've figured out how to get the hindlegs to stop looking mangled.
Trying to use an anatomy ref for the legs because they are driving me absolutely insane. It still feels like there's some things really off about it.. aside from missing half its body, anyway <_<
Crit and suggestions are much appreciated, and thank you to those who have so far given help on it.

[Clementine Cloud]

I think it looks fine, smooth the lines a bit maybe and ad details(eyes, nose, mane) I might color it!

[iaan]

yeah i might to

[windsong427]

I did one. The original was pretty good by the way :thumbup:

[Scratchpadd]

You have a very good idea of the basic anatomy.
The head is in the right shape, and the legs are stout(of course, I am not expert at horses).I
will redine, once Oekaki decides it wants to co-operate. ;P

[arabianhorse555]

did a redline, hope it helps

[ghftz.]

Hey, so a great thank you to those who helped with making this look like a horse. It's likely not entirely realistic, but it is definately worlds better than it started off as and these tips have been a huge help towards improvement.
Any advice is still very much welcome, though in the meantime I'm likely to move onto practicing different positions and probably won't work on this one anymore. I added basic LA layer and don't mind at all if anyone else can find a use for it.

[MustangKnight]

I can help if you would like me too c:

[Dizzy socks]

Any chance of you selling these lines?

[clip ♡]

I will try^^