[keep the impulse]

ok the timer is wrong but anyways i need a red line because im not very good could anybody help

[Kaita]

I would love to outline for you. Can you add me to the list? (:

[hound7]

Me to, i'd love to help! c:

[Kaita]

1) Your forehead is too short.
2) The nose was too blocky. A dog's mouth slants inward and the mouth is wide. I added more curavture to the neck and chest area.
3) A dog's ears (unless cropped) are not pointy at the end. They have a soft edge and are fluffy.
4) Just straitened and fluffed the neck.
5) More fluffy

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