by BlueCynder » Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:11 am
I liked how this turned out. Comments please. It's a cat walking on water that is reflecting a blue moon and stars. Is it intermediate worthy?
Evening walks among the orchard,
She greets the dancing dusk,
A spirit of the air;
A lady, if you must,
Her dress a robe of twilight,
Her eyes awash with sun.
She places gems of water,
Along the grass, among
The apples fallen, withered
By her master, Autumn Sire,
Coloured in the lilac glow
Of Winter’s sharp satire.